Essay:environmental problems are too great to be managed by individuals so real change can only be achieved
at government level.
To what extent do you agree or disagreee with this statement? support your point of view with reasons
and/or examples from your own experience.
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Our Planet is facing more environment challenges like never before. This can be seen more in urban cites due to industrialisation and is having
major impact on living condition. It is believed that goverments should start to enforce policies such that entities that are causing problem to
enviroment are controlled and suggest alternative best practice, where ever necessary. The two major issues causing promblem to our eco system
is air pollution and soil contamination.
Most of us are aware on impact of air pollution , However there is very contribution made to control it. For example in vasty populated
city like Delhi, All prefer to use individual car to work place. This significantly raises carbon emmission and thereby has negative impact on
everyone. In this case, government has a major role to in introducing effective public and some strict policies enforced like car pooling which
will reduced the pollution levels
The second major concern for environment is the soil contamination. In india for instance farmers are over using the fertilisers
for returns. This is causing health issues with fertiliser chemicals getting into human intake. Governments should help farmer provide
subsidiary for organic farming and provide loans to sustain this kind of farming. This will help reduce soil contamination and lead to health
intake.
After discussing the major issues causing environment , It can be concluded that government action has more positive impact in bring down the
problem, ofcourse the people have there bit to make . IT is also suggested there should be people and governorment jointly run initiatives to reduce
the impact on damage on environment for better living conditions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...hat entities that are causing problem to enviroment are controlled and suggest al...
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... us are aware on impact of air pollution , However there is very contribution made...
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...ssion and thereby has negative impact on everyone. In this case, government has a...
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...policies enforced like car pooling which will reduced the pollution levels T...
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...hich will reduced the pollution levels The second major concern for environment...
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...s more positive impact in bring down the problem, ofcourse the people have there ...
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Suggestion: bitten
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Suggestion: .
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... . IT is also suggested there should be people and governorment jointly run initiative...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.291666666667 0.247107183377 118% => OK
Verbs: 0.204861111111 0.155533422707 132% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0902777777778 0.0946595960268 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0416666666667 0.0501214627716 83% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0208333333333 0.0437548338989 48% => OK
Prepositions: 0.104166666667 0.122226691241 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0694444444444 0.0403226058552 172% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.88797196583 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0416666666667 0.0326793684256 128% => OK
Particles: 0.00347222222222 0.00163938923432 212% => OK
Determiners: 0.0590277777778 0.0861772015684 68% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0243055555556 0.021408717616 114% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0104166666667 0.011925033212 87% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1731.0 1933.35771543 90% => OK
No of words: 271.0 316.048096192 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.38745387454 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.420664206642 0.374742101984 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.287822878229 0.28420135186 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.19557195572 0.203846283523 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.147601476015 0.137316102897 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88797196583 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.037074148 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594095940959 0.56093040696 106% => OK
Word variations: 63.0300999909 60.7387585426 104% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.3571428571 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4989986555 49.517814964 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.642857143 127.492653851 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.642857142857 0.814263465372 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.38877755511 319% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 10.0 3.99599198397 250% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 48.13943068 49.1944974215 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.74025974026 1.69124875643 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134426993039 0.332605444948 40% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.079130681037 0.102741220458 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0681173889417 0.0668466124924 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.66218540623 0.534860350844 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.239984948697 0.148594505496 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559673105236 0.134430193775 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278623608053 0.0742795772207 38% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.0851591111809 0.324371583561 26% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.054251302139 0.0638462369009 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0515232520407 0.228012699653 23% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332217356096 0.058150111329 57% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.