The pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrested in the five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrest.
The pie chart illustrates the percentage of males and females who were arrested from 1989 to 1994, while the bar chart compares the main reasons that the different genders were arrested most recently. It is evident from the charts that males were arrested more than females and that public drinking was the most common reason for arrest for both.
To begin, the proportion of males arrested was much greater than for females. 32% were arrested compared to only 9% for women. Turning to the reasons for the most recent arrests, there were some clear differences between men and women. Men were twice as likely to be arrested for drink driving than women, at 26% and 14% respectively. Breach of order, assault, and other reasons were also slightly higher for men, all standing at around 12-18%. Interestingly though, women experienced a higher percentage of arrest rates for assault and public drinking. The figures for assault were fairly similar at approximately 18%, whereas public drinking represented the main reason for arrest, with women at a massive 38%, compared to 31% for men.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...for men, all standing at around 12-18%. Interestingly though, women experienced ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'so', 'whereas', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.259615384615 0.268076937826 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.129807692308 0.116061578633 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0961538461538 0.0759168565197 127% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0625 0.0366838410393 170% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00480769230769 0.0131127313244 37% => OK
Prepositions: 0.149038461538 0.155750635184 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0480769230769 0.0379272487307 127% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.47527900909 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0288461538462 0.0210936926555 137% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0865384615385 0.0948980150116 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00480769230769 0.00967000014798 50% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1089.0 1161.00487805 94% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.9 91% => OK
Chars per words: 6.05 5.90752243213 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73763899035 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.388888888889 0.337110787985 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.272222222222 0.247514529752 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.161111111111 0.171178102325 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0722222222222 0.112407865282 64% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47527900909 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572222222222 0.546246751206 105% => OK
Word variations: 50.860174849 49.3433353143 103% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0094962315 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0024153955 42.9750493124 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 135.714022679 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 23.0094962315 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.689975730869 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.84146341463 52% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 47.2222222222 47.7609492067 99% => OK
Elegance: 2.31707317073 2.94281807926 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437130549737 0.418131533498 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.202508359496 0.181151798455 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0788510012341 0.0850326197045 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.581896995278 0.706616315825 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.143133636899 0.157042692854 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.206225275601 0.228904883108 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157219436773 0.108899403657 144% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.406676693808 0.367819155151 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0 0.0812612215331 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.39969803296 0.316326947829 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12523834231 0.0921553760075 136% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70731707317 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.14146341463 788% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.08536585366 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 0.0 3.16585365854 0% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 7.0 0.956097560976 732% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.