You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Dear James,
I’m very glad to receive your letter, haven’t heard news from you for a long period. First of all, I want to say that college is not the best choice for you. The matter is that education in your country is very expensive and demand a lot of time spending in educational facility.
The reason why you should get a job is that you need to obtain some experience. Contemporary educational programs include only theory and none of the practice. Besides, this is a good opportunity for you to start to earn money and help your parents.
As I know, there are few manufacturing facilities in your district where you can find free vacancy that suits you. However, you communicating abilities are good and you can also try yourself in hotel business. I’ve seen a lot of advertisements in your local newspaper which have different job vacancies including supervisors, cleaners even welders. But some of them require the particular experience, so you need to try something easier.
Looking forward to hearing from you!
Your sincerely, Givi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...earing from you! Your sincerely, Givi
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.22380952381 0.220444632235 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.152380952381 0.167888034529 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0761904761905 0.0606518309736 126% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0428571428571 0.0506257000042 85% => OK
Pronouns: 0.109523809524 0.118615021944 92% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0904761904762 0.107062808482 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0285714285714 0.041066498444 70% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86761847228 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0333333333333 0.0385302599488 87% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0761904761905 0.0714148451538 107% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0142857142857 0.0191574576366 75% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0142857142857 0.00930345855455 154% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1073.0 1141.60824742 94% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.134020619 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.02808988764 5.53046319177 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78085437643 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.314606741573 0.284621296913 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.269662921348 0.211203875043 128% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.202247191011 0.133321485273 152% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.14606741573 0.0843313296314 173% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86761847228 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668539325843 0.622163163488 107% => OK
Word variations: 69.2423251457 62.8969750728 110% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 12.9587628866 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.8333333333 16.4300151701 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.249892334 44.7399317507 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4166666667 90.9928171075 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 16.4300151701 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.613754768223 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.09278350515 48% => OK
Readability: 41.7996254682 37.5504026743 111% => OK
Elegance: 1.125 1.13073093955 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295242043752 0.331212695627 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0795228509857 0.0927372745006 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0618776538089 0.0736520305886 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.602683890148 0.579516596996 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.193648511179 0.180689518051 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124542326621 0.122183219658 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100916500817 0.0765303033291 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.186538756596 0.211926503985 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.128454350307 0.0737400523855 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174168109434 0.203819188451 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0996584838163 0.067151250289 148% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.45360824742 80% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.48453608247 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.0206185567 99% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 4.73195876289 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 1.03092783505 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.56701030928 117% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 8.32989690722 108% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.