Most peoples believe in balanced diet because it is very important for our healthy life.In yoga it describes clearly that through yoga activities and balanced diet we can make our body as healthy.
we have many daily life examples to prove it.For example, if we ate non-veg items we feel very tiered and laziness this is because of lack of nutrients.Another example is very common that is, all diseases causing because of Proteins, Calcium, Vitamins etc. these all we get only through vegetables, wheat, milks and all.If we keep eating this type of foods we can earn a healthy life and in dieting also prefers these items to eat more rather than non-veg items.
By eating non-veg items it keeps as fatty body.And it cause increase in weight,Cholesterol etc.Doctors also preferring balanced diet for our good health.
Through balanced diet we can control our metabolic activities.It will helps to keep our heart healthier also.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'so', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221556886228 0.247107183377 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.167664670659 0.155533422707 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.119760479042 0.0946595960268 127% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0538922155689 0.0501214627716 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.101796407186 0.0437548338989 233% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.14371257485 0.122226691241 118% => OK
Participles: 0.0359281437126 0.0403226058552 89% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.76809278427 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0179640718563 0.0326793684256 55% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0479041916168 0.0861772015684 56% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0239520958084 0.021408717616 112% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 933.0 1933.35771543 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 154.0 316.048096192 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.05844155844 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 4.20517956788 84% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.357142857143 0.374742101984 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.298701298701 0.28420135186 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.162337662338 0.203846283523 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0779220779221 0.137316102897 57% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76809278427 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 176.037074148 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.56093040696 113% => OK
Word variations: 58.6145488941 60.7387585426 97% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0891783567 31% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 30.8 20.7743622355 148% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1959347914 49.517814964 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 186.6 127.492653851 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8 20.7743622355 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.814263465372 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 3.99599198397 325% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 60.6701298701 49.1944974215 123% => OK
Elegance: 1.24074074074 1.69124875643 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189724921341 0.332605444948 57% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.205043627325 0.102741220458 200% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0401638867481 0.0668466124924 60% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.905717467723 0.534860350844 169% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.118141186513 0.148594505496 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115229325676 0.134430193775 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629935457938 0.0742795772207 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.174110747951 0.324371583561 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0224686942237 0.0638462369009 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128203883953 0.228012699653 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644336738915 0.058150111329 111% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 10.4468937876 48% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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