I strongely believe that it is essential to know about events happening around the world, even if it unlikely that they will affect my daily life, because it will help me to gain more knowledge about the world and give me the sense of predication.
First of all, it is always good to learn more. What i mean is being connected with the world by reading or watching about the world news will give a chance for people to have more information. For example, my dad used to watch the news everyday and to read about what is going on the world frequantly. This provided him with knowledge in variety of subjects. As my dad used to tell being a ware of what is going on the world is a type of wide education. I remember five years ago my family traveled to Egypt, which is a different country and different culture with different language. But my dad was a ware about the traditions of people there becuase he used to track the news around the world. Consequantely, he told us that people there are friendely as they are religious too. So if we want to have a good time there, we should not go on conversations about religions at all. As you can see, we had a good time there thanks to my dad knowledge which was a result of knowing what happening in the world.
Second, knowing what happening in the world give people chance to expect what will happen in the future. To illustrate, watching situations, actions and it is results give people experience to predict the outcome if similar situations or actions are going to happen. For example, in the 19 century there were gangs travel across the world and it was known that people suffer when they enter the country. They used to kill, steal and destory the cities. By tracking their news and their movements, Japeness people know it befor it happen on their country. People there imigrated to another country to protect themselves from the coming disasters. The country to prepared its army to avoid and arrest the gangs from damaging the country. According to the New york times, people who follow the news have 90 percent to avoid negative effects than others who do not.
To conclude, it is always good to learn and to have experince from following world events.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'for example', 'i mean', 'as a result', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.216091954023 0.229887763892 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.202298850575 0.158761421928 127% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0459770114943 0.0866891130778 53% => OK
Adverbs: 0.032183908046 0.046263068375 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0827586206897 0.0685040099705 121% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114942528736 0.118717715034 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0528735632184 0.0351676179071 150% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.44092777519 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0574712643678 0.0309702414327 186% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0827586206897 0.0887237588012 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0137931034483 0.0209618222197 66% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0252873563218 0.0139019557991 182% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2230.0 2387.08602151 93% => OK
No of words: 399.0 408.028673835 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58897243108 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.295739348371 0.338922669872 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.203007518797 0.251872472559 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.132832080201 0.174417080927 76% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0902255639098 0.112833075102 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44092777519 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47619047619 0.524397521467 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.2794510837 59.2087087015 87% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.95 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2659219248 48.84282405 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 120.699889404 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.95 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.45 0.644075263715 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 40.2507518797 45.7405998639 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.21014492754 1.45489161554 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399081974409 0.300154397459 133% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.125278560274 0.103427244359 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0875938087746 0.0752933317313 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.511157461214 0.497263757937 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.213125897716 0.151897553556 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146881062072 0.114077575197 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981225751697 0.0781384742642 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.38349255891 0.336927656856 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0699310254945 0.067059652881 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.312168560126 0.210909579961 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10979132158 0.0618886996521 177% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.75985663082 254% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.