Life now is better than it was 100 years ago. There is so many differences between our life style and ancient life styles.
Now, peoples were busy with there life. No time to speak to their family members. Modern peoples only need to make money. No time to spend for others. They prefer more junk foods, cola and all. They were not ready to make foods homely, because it will waste time for them. Modern parents have no time to speak up to their children's too. And there life is too short compare to ancient peoples. Because we can see easily that after 30 years all peoples will face some kind of diseases like sugar, cholesterol, BP like that all. Now peoples are short life peoples. Modern peoples have no other exercises too.
But ancient peoples were not like this. They were really more different from modern peoples. They were spend more time with their family members. They were not bothered about money, status and all. They only focus on happy life. They prefer homely food mainly. Because of that reason they were healthy enough to live about 80-90. Ancient peoples were long life peoples. They cook food by themselves and that will be healthiest food too. Mostly they were walked to reach most of the places. These all help them to live more than modern peoples.
So we can conclude that ancient life is better than modern life.
- Some people argue that eating a balanced diet is the most important factor for a healthy life. To what extent do you agree? 56
- The chart below show the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- life now is better than it was 100 years ago. 56
- The chart below show the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nd more time with their family members. They were not bothered about money, status a...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t bothered about money, status and all. They only focus on happy life. They prefer h...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...and all. They only focus on happy life. They prefer homely food mainly. Because of t...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y life. They prefer homely food mainly. Because of that reason they were healthy enough...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the healthiest'.
Suggestion: be the healthiest
...y cook food by themselves and that will be healthiest food too. Mostly they were walked to re...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.218518518519 0.247107183377 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.144444444444 0.155533422707 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103703703704 0.0946595960268 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0814814814815 0.0501214627716 163% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0777777777778 0.0437548338989 178% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0925925925926 0.122226691241 76% => OK
Participles: 0.00740740740741 0.0403226058552 18% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 1.87634395967 2.80594681477 67% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0407407407407 0.0326793684256 125% => OK
Particles: 0.0037037037037 0.00163938923432 226% => OK
Determiners: 0.0592592592593 0.0861772015684 69% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0185185185185 0.021408717616 86% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1348.0 1933.35771543 70% => OK
No of words: 239.0 316.048096192 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64016736402 6.12580529183 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20517956788 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.276150627615 0.374742101984 74% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.171548117155 0.28420135186 60% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.071129707113 0.203846283523 35% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0292887029289 0.137316102897 21% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 1.87634395967 2.80594681477 67% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.037074148 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506276150628 0.56093040696 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.7465425048 60.7387585426 77% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0891783567 155% => OK
Sentence length: 9.56 20.7743622355 46% => Sentence lengths are too short.
Sentence length SD: 21.2037732491 49.517814964 43% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.92 127.492653851 42% => More chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.56 20.7743622355 46% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.2 0.814263465372 25% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.99599198397 150% => OK
Readability: 26.7148117155 49.1944974215 54% => OK
Elegance: 1.0487804878 1.69124875643 62% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212321005235 0.332605444948 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0891946945524 0.102741220458 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.061920219253 0.0668466124924 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.430692777737 0.534860350844 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.161839910235 0.148594505496 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820730318919 0.134430193775 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.198957405644 0.0742795772207 268% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.231131551645 0.324371583561 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.154564308872 0.0638462369009 242% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25985221365 0.228012699653 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.2393348424 0.058150111329 412% => Less connections among paragraphs
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.41683366733 322% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 10.0 1.9629258517 509% => Less neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 21.0 10.4468937876 201% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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