We recommend that monarch books open a cafe in its store.Monarch having been in business at the same locations for
more than twenty years,has a large customer base because it is known for its wide selection of books on all subjects.Clearly, opening the cafe would attract more customers.Space could be made for the cafe by discontinuing the children's books section,which will probably will become less popular given that most recent national census indicated a significant decline in the percentage of the population under age ten.Opening a cafe will allow monarch to attract more customers and better compete with regal books,which recently opened its own cafe.
write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result.be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
It is recommended that Monarch Books should open a new café in its store, to attract more customers, and the space for the same can be made by discontinuing children’s book section.
It is important to understand the bifurcation of customer base of Monarch books, it is possible that one of the major segments their customer base is children. And then discontinuing the children section may result in reduction of their business. Reasoning for discontinuing the children is based on a recent national census, which indicates a significant decline in population under age ten. But census data is indicating the decline at national level, it is possible that area in which Monarch café is present, there is no decline or may be there is an increase in children of age under ten, whereas holistically decline is observed.
There is also a possibility that people visiting Monarch Books, prefer to read at home instead of reading at the store. So, opening a café would not help in increasing the customer base. It is also possible that opening a café impairs the aesthetics of the store, resulting in a negative impact on customer base.
Recommendation is enforced stating that Regal Books has opened a new café, so to provide a better competition Monarch Books should also open the café. But it is worth analyzing that, how much increase in customers is observed in Regal Books due to café. There are chances that customer frequency has increased due to introduction of new concept of café in bookstore, however the charm is not going to be permanent.
In addition to this Regal books may have a smaller customer base, providing space for most of the customers to sit and do a peaceful reading. Monarch Books being for twenty years in business has a bigger customer base, because of which only a few will be able to sit in café, at the same time the amount of rush in surroundings will be higher. Therefore even if the concept had a positive impact in case of Regal Books may have a negative result in case of Monarch Books.
- The following appeared in the editorial section of a local newspaper:Two years ago Nova High School began to use interactive computer instruction in three academic subjects. The school dropout rate declined immediately, and last year’s graduates have re 50
- We recommend that monarch books open a cafe in its store.Monarch having been in business at the same locations formore than twenty years,has a large customer base because it is known for its wide selection of books on all subjects.Clearly, opening the caf 54
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'whereas', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.266839378238 0.25644967241 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.178756476684 0.15541462614 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0854922279793 0.0836205057962 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0362694300518 0.0520304965353 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0233160621762 0.0272364105082 86% => OK
Prepositions: 0.134715025907 0.125424944231 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0621761658031 0.0416121511921 149% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.79600881423 2.79052419416 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0259067357513 0.026700313972 97% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0906735751295 0.113004496875 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0259067357513 0.0255425247493 101% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0155440414508 0.0127820249294 122% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2038.0 2731.13054187 75% => OK
No of words: 352.0 446.07635468 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78977272727 6.12365571057 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.57801047555 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.34375 0.378187486979 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.269886363636 0.287650121315 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.1875 0.208842608468 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.102272727273 0.135150697306 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79600881423 2.79052419416 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 207.018472906 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477272727273 0.469332199767 102% => OK
Word variations: 49.3570769994 52.1807786196 95% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.039408867 70% => OK
Sentence length: 25.1428571429 23.2022227129 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.679185219 57.7814097925 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.571428571 141.986410481 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 23.2022227129 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.724660767414 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.58251231527 56% => OK
Readability: 52.1314935065 51.9672348444 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.94565217391 1.8405768891 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447509332724 0.441005458295 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.17749608729 0.135418324435 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0803911270681 0.0829849096947 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.660407213195 0.58762219726 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141841453856 0.147661913831 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.208712022107 0.193483328276 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672618652097 0.0970749176394 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.360852994938 0.42659136922 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0368735907326 0.0774707102158 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304679066279 0.312017818177 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429595524567 0.0698173142475 62% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.33743842365 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.87684729064 44% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.82512315271 62% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 6.46551724138 108% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 5.36822660099 56% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.82389162562 106% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 14.657635468 89% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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