Agree or disagree ?
Because the world changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
There are no reasons for us not to enjoy appreciate our lives, no matter whether we are successful or not. That being said, I am of the opinion that people now are not less happy or less satisfied with their lives than they were in the past because of tremendous changes of the world. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, we are living in a peaceful war where people can live an enjoyable life. Under no circumstances could people in the past have been happier that we are now. To put it another way, our ancestors had to withstand and survive numerous wars. Wars forced men of the families to go out on battle fields, many of them didn't have the chance to come back. As a result, it is not likely that families back then could be satisfied with their lives not knowing whether their relatives could survive the war. My grandparents' anecdote is a good example to illustrate this. When my grandfather was around his thirties, the Vietnam war took place, then he was obliged to be a soldier battling on the fields. Not a single day passing by that my grandmother didn't worry about her husband's life. She told me that it was a tough time for her and she couldn't enjoy her life until my grandfather fortunately came back. In contrast, since wars have ended and human rights have been taken more seriously, people now can have a more satisfying life.
Furthermore, the world has undergone many changes, but none more so than the innovation of technology, which makes people's lives much easier. That is to say, mostly every appliances are generated automatically and can work without the need of humans. People nowadays don't have to waste their precious time doing household chores with the advent of top-of-the-shelf technology, such as washing machine, dishwasher, robotic vacuum cleaner, all of which have the capability to work automatically. Moreover, technological innovations have presented our generation with all kinds of entertainment with smartphones, computers or, especially, internet. For instance, my grandmother can have more time for her interests like yoga and travelling because she doesn't need to do strenuous household tasks all day, since she has machines to do it for her.
Owing to all the reasons mentioned above, I truly feel that people nowadays are happier than they were in the past, despite the world changing drastically. This is because the world is a peaceful and harmonious place now and technological innovations have made people lives much easier.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e she has machines to do it for her. Owing to all the reasons mentioned above...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'furthermore', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'for instance', 'i feel', 'in contrast', 'such as', 'as a result', 'to begin with', 'that is to say']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.212943632568 0.229887763892 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.171189979123 0.158761421928 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0709812108559 0.0866891130778 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0709812108559 0.046263068375 153% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0814196242171 0.0685040099705 119% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118997912317 0.118717715034 100% => OK
Participles: 0.035490605428 0.0351676179071 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75196338441 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0292275574113 0.0309702414327 94% => OK
Particles: 0.00208768267223 0.00188951952338 110% => OK
Determiners: 0.0855949895616 0.0887237588012 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0167014613779 0.0209618222197 80% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0125260960334 0.0139019557991 90% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2588.0 2387.08602151 108% => OK
No of words: 432.0 408.028673835 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.99074074074 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.303240740741 0.338922669872 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.243055555556 0.251872472559 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.166666666667 0.174417080927 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127314814815 0.112833075102 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75196338441 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543981481481 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 63.4710300038 59.2087087015 107% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.6 20.5533526081 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4943674514 48.84282405 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.4 120.699889404 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.5533526081 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.65 0.644075263715 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.54480286738 162% => OK
Readability: 45.9055555556 45.7405998639 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.13548387097 1.45489161554 78% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350186800208 0.300154397459 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0871583540614 0.103427244359 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0559806746484 0.0752933317313 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.431104486466 0.497263757937 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.137689584653 0.151897553556 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115554612352 0.114077575197 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120991239362 0.0781384742642 155% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.311324410506 0.336927656856 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0282455070935 0.067059652881 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274565996375 0.210909579961 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112239508364 0.0618886996521 181% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.86379928315 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.