Both reading and lecture are taking about the debate of dinosaurs were endotherms or not.
First, the reading states that there is a common features between endotherms and dinosaurs like, dinosaurs have legs underneath their body, and this position help dinosaurs to run as endotherms. However, the professor refutes this idea by saying the is not nessessary to explain that dinosaurs were endotherms. He mentions that these legs to support the heavy waight. dinosaurs have large size.
Second, the reading introduces that dinosaurs were endotherms becuase there were found at polar regions. Nevertheless. the professor questions this point by saying even dinosaurs have been founded in polar region, this not indication that they are enotherms, because not endotherms live in cold area . He mentions that even if dinosaurs migrates to warmer area this does not prove that dinosaurs were endotherms.
Third, the reading mentions that the endothems generally have haversian canals in their bone, as a result dinosaurs were endothers becuse dinosaurs also have haversian canals in their bones. On the other hand, the professor avers this idea by saying, even dinosaurs have haversian in their bone this does not confirm that theye are dinosaurs. They have growth ring which is founded in their bones. This rings indicates rapid or slow growth. according to envioroment, the growth will be slow in cold then rapidly according to the enviromental cold.
Therefor, the professor opposes the ideas introduced in the reading.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'as a result', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.2734082397 0.261695866417 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.194756554307 0.158904122519 123% => OK
Adjectives: 0.059925093633 0.0723426182421 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0561797752809 0.0435111971325 129% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0337078651685 0.0277247811725 122% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112359550562 0.128828473217 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0524344569288 0.0370669169778 141% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62008468375 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0224719101124 0.0208969081088 108% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.104868913858 0.128158765124 82% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00374531835206 0.0158828679856 24% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00749063670412 0.0114777025283 65% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1548.0 1645.83664459 94% => OK
No of words: 240.0 271.125827815 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.45 6.08160592843 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.04852973271 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.383333333333 0.374372842146 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.3125 0.287516216867 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.225 0.187439937562 120% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1875 0.113142543107 166% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62008468375 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5125 0.539623497131 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.6233642711 53.8517498576 88% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0529801325 115% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.7502111507 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6484676659 49.3711431718 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.2 132.220823453 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 21.7502111507 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.733333333333 0.878197800319 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 3.39072847682 295% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 47.25 50.5018328374 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.53947368421 1.90840788429 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314017755682 0.549887131256 57% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.133259977839 0.142949733639 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0993672902121 0.0787303798458 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.570236986806 0.631733273073 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.256506730176 0.139662658121 184% => Sentences are changing often in a paragraphs.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132817169177 0.266732575781 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775442383152 0.103435571967 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.349876384941 0.414875509568 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0762451291087 0.0530846634433 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215752203548 0.40443939384 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042409205945 0.0528353158467 80% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.26048565121 188% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.49668874172 86% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.62251655629 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 7.0 3.1766004415 220% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.2958057395 97% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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