The table chart compares the numbers of prisoners from 1930 to 1980 in five different countries namely Great Britain, Australia, New Zealand, United States and Canada.
It is clearly seen that the United States had the highest number of imprisonment overall. Also, Britain had the lowest figure for 4 out of 6 years. In 1930, the number of prisoners in the United States was the highest with 120 thousand prisoners, then increased significantly to reach a peak of 140 thousand people in 1980.By contrast, Britain had the lowest figure until 1970, then figure jumped suddenly to reach 90 thousand prisoners.
Canada had the highest number of imprisonment in 1930 and 1960 with nearly 140 thousand people in each year. In 1970 the number of prisoners in Great Britain, New Zealand and Australia was same, about 70 thousand people. In 1980, 50 thousands of people in New Zealand were put in prison which was the lowest figure in this year.
- Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village.(Study Sample) 56
- The table below shows the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc.) owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. 56
- The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980. 67
- The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: By
...h a peak of 140 thousand people in 1980.By contrast, Britain had the lowest figure...
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Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '50 thousand'.
Suggestion: 50 thousand
...ame, about 70 thousand people. In 1980, 50 thousands of people in New Zealand were put in priso...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'so', 'then']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.293785310734 0.268076937826 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.090395480226 0.116061578633 78% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0677966101695 0.0759168565197 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.045197740113 0.0366838410393 123% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00564971751412 0.0131127313244 43% => OK
Prepositions: 0.158192090395 0.155750635184 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0112994350282 0.0379272487307 30% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.49871609768 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0169491525424 0.0210936926555 80% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0847457627119 0.0948980150116 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00564971751412 0.00967000014798 58% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 942.0 1161.00487805 81% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.9 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92452830189 5.90752243213 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73763899035 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.40251572327 0.337110787985 119% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.238993710692 0.247514529752 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.163522012579 0.171178102325 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0943396226415 0.112407865282 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49871609768 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540880503145 0.546246751206 99% => OK
Word variations: 44.2947662289 49.3433353143 90% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 22.7142857143 23.0094962315 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.5983176073 42.9750493124 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.571428571 135.714022679 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 23.0094962315 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.689975730869 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 46.6136567835 47.7609492067 98% => OK
Elegance: 3.28 2.94281807926 111% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353717198468 0.418131533498 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.243212082851 0.181151798455 134% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0941310910892 0.0850326197045 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.73944883806 0.706616315825 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162956604633 0.157042692854 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207020936721 0.228904883108 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064341008464 0.108899403657 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.404938586229 0.367819155151 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0723848953392 0.0812612215331 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285663596369 0.316326947829 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419504685725 0.0921553760075 46% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.14146341463 263% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.08536585366 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 0.956097560976 209% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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