People have always had different ideas about topics, but one of the most significant future in humans is thinking or being silent whenever is needed. Also, people can talk to each other and solve their problem. As a matter of fact, interrupt people is a kind of rude. Thus, saying nothing about your idea is a big mistake. No body can find out his/her mistake. If I were in that situation, I would choose the second solution.
First of all, people can talk about their idea and see other's opinions. Sometimes, people made a mistake, but they are not aware of that. They need to talk to some body about that and compare those ideas. Consequently, people can make a right decision about an issue or whatever. People can discuss about topics and pick their favorite side.
Second of all, people can help each other to find the best answer for any question. If somebody knows about something, he/she have to share it with others to improve the knowledge. For instance, I used to go to the karate class. Our teacher told us about a new move in karate. I read an article about this move in an international magazine before and I was sure that our teacher made a mistake to explain about this move. After the class, I went to her and explain it to her. She didn't accept my idea in the first place, but after two days, she called me and told me that I was right and she never knows about it before. It was really nice that I helped her to teach others in a right way.
Third of all, people are responsible about each other. They should share their thoughts with each others and they should help each other to improve the society. Saying nothing about a matter that he/she thinks is wrong is the biggest mistake ever. This mistake can go around the world by that silence. One the other hand, interrupting people is not a nice manner. Most of people do not care about those people who interrupt each other easily. Being polite is a key to success in these kinds of debates. People will pay more attention to a person, who is polite enough for communication.
To sum up, people are responsible about each other and they should say something about a matter that they think is not true, but they should say their words in a right situation and with a polite manner.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 324, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'Nobody'?
Suggestion: Nobody
...thing about your idea is a big mistake. No body can find out his/her mistake. If I were...
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Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'somebody'?
Suggestion: somebody
...not aware of that. They need to talk to some body about that and compare those ideas. Con...
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Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... somebody knows about something, he/she have to share it with others to improve the ...
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Line 5, column 481, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... went to her and explain it to her. She didnt accept my idea in the first place, but ...
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Line 5, column 675, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... nice that I helped her to teach others in a right way. Third of all, people are responsi...
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Line 5, column 691, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ped her to teach others in a right way. Third of all, people are responsible abo...
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Line 7, column 365, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...terrupting people is not a nice manner. Most of people do not care about those people who inte...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'if', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'third', 'thus', 'for instance', 'kind of', 'as a matter of fact', 'first of all', 'to sum up', 'in the first place']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.203463203463 0.229887763892 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.149350649351 0.158761421928 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0844155844156 0.0866891130778 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.034632034632 0.046263068375 75% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0822510822511 0.0685040099705 120% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112554112554 0.118717715034 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0151515151515 0.0351676179071 43% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.24448130511 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Infinitives: 0.034632034632 0.0309702414327 112% => OK
Particles: 0.004329004329 0.00188951952338 229% => OK
Determiners: 0.11038961039 0.0887237588012 124% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0281385281385 0.0209618222197 134% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00865800865801 0.0139019557991 62% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2263.0 2387.08602151 95% => OK
No of words: 414.0 408.028673835 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46618357488 5.86048508987 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.280193236715 0.338922669872 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.147342995169 0.251872472559 58% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0869565217391 0.174417080927 50% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0531400966184 0.112833075102 47% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.24448130511 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466183574879 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.531961089 59.2087087015 85% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6684587814 135% => OK
Sentence length: 14.7857142857 20.5533526081 72% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4024581752 48.84282405 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8214285714 120.699889404 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7857142857 20.5533526081 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.644075263715 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 29.5200138026 45.7405998639 65% => OK
Elegance: 1.24390243902 1.45489161554 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285022173515 0.300154397459 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0919664273996 0.103427244359 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0716450715606 0.0752933317313 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.432908947133 0.497263757937 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.144390728647 0.151897553556 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965969499339 0.114077575197 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501005389173 0.0781384742642 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.329395154781 0.336927656856 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0404657122845 0.067059652881 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179341704325 0.210909579961 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702315577226 0.0618886996521 113% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.86379928315 311% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 2.4623655914 325% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.