Due to people are ignoring the advertisement, the company started the technique called Buzzer who works for the company but people do not know that and the reading and the Bill discussing this issues in very contrast ways.
Firstly, reading passage says that because buzzers are paid by the companies they may hidden the all information about the product and they may misguide the people. But, Bill says that he working in the cell phone company because it is good company and their product. Further, he says that cell phone which has very good features that reasons he is working for that company otherwise he wont to that job.
Secondly, reading claims that when company advertising then people have the chance to get good customer service, repairing and warranty for the particular product whereas buzzer it is kind lobbing the consumer. Again, he states that when customer purchasing a product they ask so many question like price, service and features of the product. If, he does know about the product details then he cannot explains the consumer doubts that makes him in trouble.
Thirdly, reading suggests that social relationship between the company and the customer will spoil due to buzzer's mistrusting character and the hidden information. Still, he refuses this statement by stating that when a company popular and branded one then they do not hire such kind buzzer who spread falls promises about the product. So, buzzer will not harm public relationship with company at any cost and people can trust the buzzer.
To sum up, the reading claims that the buzzers may tell fall information, lobbing the people and they break the social relationship because they are paid without public awareness. But, Bill opposes these points by explaining all reasons beyond polices with reasonable arguments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'hide' or 'be hidden'?
Suggestion: hide; be hidden
...zers are paid by the companies they may hidden the all information about the product a...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[6]
Message: 'He' in subjunctive clause must be used base form of the verb: 'work'.
Suggestion: work
...uide the people. But, Bill says that he working in the cell phone company because it is...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to get good customer service, repairing and warranty for the particular product ...
^^
Line 5, column 345, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e, service and features of the product. If, he does know about the product details...
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Line 10, column 280, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...yond polices with reasonable arguments.
^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'whereas', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.258461538462 0.261695866417 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.178461538462 0.158904122519 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0492307692308 0.0723426182421 68% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0523076923077 0.0435111971325 120% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0553846153846 0.0277247811725 200% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0984615384615 0.128828473217 76% => OK
Participles: 0.0523076923077 0.0370669169778 141% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.43951418655 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0153846153846 0.0208969081088 74% => OK
Particles: 0.00307692307692 0.00154638098197 199% => OK
Determiners: 0.113846153846 0.128158765124 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0215384615385 0.0158828679856 136% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0246153846154 0.0114777025283 214% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1827.0 1645.83664459 111% => OK
No of words: 297.0 271.125827815 110% => OK
Chars per words: 6.15151515152 6.08160592843 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.04852973271 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.40404040404 0.374372842146 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.306397306397 0.287516216867 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.154882154882 0.187439937562 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0808080808081 0.113142543107 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43951418655 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 145.348785872 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511784511785 0.539623497131 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.1907697707 53.8517498576 95% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0529801325 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.75 21.7502111507 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6333894028 49.3711431718 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.25 132.220823453 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 21.7502111507 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.16666666667 0.878197800319 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.39072847682 147% => OK
Readability: 55.3897306397 50.5018328374 110% => OK
Elegance: 1.43010752688 1.90840788429 75% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.499796938919 0.549887131256 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.163560245805 0.142949733639 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.110616186199 0.0787303798458 141% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.657893539516 0.631733273073 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.138842381675 0.139662658121 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.238402920949 0.266732575781 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110824193259 0.103435571967 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.383882416285 0.414875509568 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0437504752861 0.0530846634433 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.349964343248 0.40443939384 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187622876488 0.0528353158467 36% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.26048565121 70% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.49668874172 172% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.1766004415 94% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.2958057395 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.