Because of the increasingly rapid pace of the modern society, people are always required to work efficiently. This current situation triggered the debate in society about whether people should work quickly with the probability to make mistakes or work slowly to check everything alright. In my perspective, work quickly is essential to the success of companies or individuals and more important than accuracy nowadays.
To a company, work quickly enable you to public the product earlier than your opponents, which is extremely significant to attract more users at the very beginning. People nowadays always pursue novel and cool things that never exist before, such like new computer games or electric cars produced by Tesla. If a similar product was published by your opponents before you, your product will be seemed as a copy one and have difficulties to dominate the market. Think about the first version of iPhone. The prototype showed in the Apple Event cannot even run smoothly, but the idea of it was original and so cool, successfully caught people’s eyes, represented a new lifestyle and attracted so much people to try it and become fans of Apple. What is a great business strategy!
What's more, it is merely an impossible mission to ensure everything is correct by checking and checking again. A much more efficient and widely used way is putting it into use, listening to users' experience and opinions, then keeping improving your work. Microsoft is a good example, every time they finish a new version of Windows, they do not spend lots of time on testing it because they know there is no perfect software. Instead, a beta version was published to let users try it and report bugs to developers. Therefore, bugs can be found and fixed quickly. After that, Microsoft publish a stable version eventually. This process not only prevents fruitless effort, but also makes the Windows operation system can always be updated in a pretty fast pace and benefit its users.
Admittedly, we need to care about details to finish the work perfectly. Everyone should not just finish work in hasty without consideration about consequence and quality, which will ruin your all effort. It pays to do careful check before deliver your work. But we also cannot tolerant working too slow to miss the opportunity and make all the previous work futile.
Work quickly and show your achievement soon is definitely an important quality for both companies and individuals in this rapidly changing society, which will contribute to make you prominent from others and ensure a better future. Although you might risk making mistakes, but it is totally ok, As the old saying goes, "Never afraid of making mistakes because that is a part of progress".
- TPO-23 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.Use specific reasons an 76
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- TPO-23 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.Use specific reasons an 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.228888888889 0.229887763892 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.164444444444 0.158761421928 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0844444444444 0.0866891130778 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0844444444444 0.046263068375 183% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0511111111111 0.0685040099705 75% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0911111111111 0.118717715034 77% => OK
Participles: 0.0333333333333 0.0351676179071 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69579343149 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0311111111111 0.0309702414327 100% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0822222222222 0.0887237588012 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.02 0.0209618222197 95% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0111111111111 0.0139019557991 80% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2433.0 2387.08602151 102% => OK
No of words: 404.0 408.028673835 99% => OK
Chars per words: 6.02227722772 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.393564356436 0.338922669872 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.289603960396 0.251872472559 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.180693069307 0.174417080927 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.121287128713 0.112833075102 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69579343149 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581683168317 0.524397521467 111% => OK
Word variations: 69.4304047803 59.2087087015 117% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.2631578947 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3389206812 48.84282405 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.052631579 120.699889404 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2631578947 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.421052631579 0.644075263715 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 50.2235539343 45.7405998639 110% => OK
Elegance: 1.17777777778 1.45489161554 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432100298486 0.300154397459 144% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0802883778288 0.103427244359 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0663062174861 0.0752933317313 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.497529338205 0.497263757937 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155415868249 0.151897553556 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147279054819 0.114077575197 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782629479687 0.0781384742642 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.230803711018 0.336927656856 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0755051563627 0.067059652881 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264317404956 0.210909579961 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395896150966 0.0618886996521 64% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.