The best way to improve quality of education is to increase teachers’ salaries.
As a matter of fact, teachers have always had a big effect on society, so one of the most important things that governments should pay attention to is paying them fairly. There is some doubts and debates around increasing the salary of teachers, but as everyone knows increasing the salary is a smart move to encourage teachers to stay in the same job and focus on their major as well as they can.
First and foremost, good salary is an essential factor in satisfaction for all employees especially teachers. A satisfied teacher will make a good atmosphere in the classroom. Consequently, children will learn better and faster in a good atmosphere.
Second, having a job with enough salary is a basic factor for a job, so teachers with enough salary do not need to find another job for pay their bills or cover their expenses. These kinds of lucky teachers will focus on their career during a term and obviously they will teach better with more efficiently. For instance, I used to study in a mediocre school in my home country Iran. One of my teachers who had a small amount salary per month, was working in that school and another company in the same time. Most time she was bored and sleepy during the class. She was keep saying us about finding a good job with pleasant salary. We were almost absent in her class, because we didn't have any motivation to go to her class.
Last but not least, paying more to this group of people is a key to success in education, because of experiences. Having a experienced teacher is not possible by a low paycheck. Most teachers will leave their job after a while if they feel that their salary is not that much. Undoubtedly, one of the best ways to keep teachers in their work is increasing their salary. Although, much salary teachers have more expense for a school, they help children to learn better. Experienced teachers will have a huge effect on children's education.
To sum up, teachers have not only a huge influence on children in school, but also have a incredible effect on society. Paying attention to their needs are necessary. Happy teacher will make happy students who have a strong ability to learn everything.
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Essay evaluation report
There is some doubts and debates
There are some doubts and debates
teachers have not only a huge influence on children in school, but also have a incredible effect on society.
Description: 'Not only...but also' is not used properly. can you re-write this sentence?
Sentence: Second, having a job with enough salary is a basic factor for a job, so teachers with enough salary do not need to find another job for pay their bills or cover their expenses.
Description: The token for is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to for and pay
Sentence: She was keep saying us about finding a good job with pleasant salary.
Description: The token was is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to was and keep
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
The first reason is too short
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 384 350
No. of Characters: 1743 1500
No. of Different Words: 194 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.427 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.539 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.461 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 121 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 73 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 56 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.553 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.429 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.3 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.511 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.118 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
I didn't get 2,3 and 4.
I didn't get 2,3 and 4. please explain it in another word.
teachers have not only a huge
teachers have not only a huge influence on children in school, but also have a incredible effect on society.
teachers not only have a huge influence on children in school, but also have an incredible effect on society.
teachers have not only a huge influence on children in school, but also an incredible effect on society.
//parallel for not only ...but also
to find another job for pay their bills or cover their expenses.
to find another job to pay their bills or cover their expenses.
to find another job for paying their bills or cover their expenses.
She was keep saying us about finding a good job with pleasant salary.
She kept on saying to us about finding a good job with a pleasant salary.
She kept on telling us about finding a good job with a pleasant salary.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'There are some doubts'?
Suggestion: There are some doubts
...pay attention to is paying them fairly. There is some doubts and debates around increasing the salar...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...room. Consequently, children will learn better and faster in a good atmosphere. Sec...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 680, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... almost absent in her class, because we didnt have any motivation to go to her class....
^^^^^
Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ucation, because of experiences. Having a experienced teacher is not possible by ...
^
Line 7, column 461, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...r a school, they help children to learn better. Experienced teachers will have a huge ...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 89, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ce on children in school, but also have a incredible effect on society. Paying at...
^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'for instance', 'as a matter of fact', 'as well as', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.228028503563 0.229887763892 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.149643705463 0.158761421928 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.106888361045 0.0866891130778 123% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0522565320665 0.046263068375 113% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0570071258907 0.0685040099705 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12351543943 0.118717715034 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0308788598575 0.0351676179071 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.5627453171 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0332541567696 0.0309702414327 107% => OK
Particles: 0.00237529691211 0.00188951952338 126% => OK
Determiners: 0.0926365795724 0.0887237588012 104% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.021377672209 0.0209618222197 102% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00712589073634 0.0139019557991 51% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2178.0 2387.08602151 91% => OK
No of words: 383.0 408.028673835 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68668407311 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.328981723238 0.338922669872 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.208877284595 0.251872472559 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.151436031332 0.174417080927 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0992167101828 0.112833075102 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5627453171 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503916449086 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 54.5423398554 59.2087087015 92% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.2380952381 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6489292531 48.84282405 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.714285714 120.699889404 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2380952381 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.619047619048 0.644075263715 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 39.1258236976 45.7405998639 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.47706422018 1.45489161554 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286129892678 0.300154397459 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.125971487555 0.103427244359 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.101853277455 0.0752933317313 135% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.477753046014 0.497263757937 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.146705348655 0.151897553556 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993870162299 0.114077575197 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756845320442 0.0781384742642 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.264084180122 0.336927656856 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0835213059813 0.067059652881 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182767100202 0.210909579961 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0907036529556 0.0618886996521 147% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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