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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... with each other, especially with those who are or could be as their friends. While som...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun doctorate seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of doctorates'.
Suggestion: A lot of doctorates
...ves which they do not know is accepted. A lot of doctorate of philosophy positions, for example, a...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...rtunities for the students to apply. Finally yet importantly, individuals who are ab...
^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'in addition', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.208646616541 0.229887763892 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.176691729323 0.158761421928 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.116541353383 0.0866891130778 134% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0563909774436 0.046263068375 122% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0601503759398 0.0685040099705 88% => OK
Prepositions: 0.103383458647 0.118717715034 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0545112781955 0.0351676179071 155% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.03761359066 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0338345864662 0.0309702414327 109% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0733082706767 0.0887237588012 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0225563909774 0.0209618222197 108% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0225563909774 0.0139019557991 162% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2979.0 2387.08602151 125% => OK
No of words: 477.0 408.028673835 117% => OK
Chars per words: 6.24528301887 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.360587002096 0.338922669872 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.285115303983 0.251872472559 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.218029350105 0.174417080927 125% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.146750524109 0.112833075102 130% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03761359066 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509433962264 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 59.4289391256 59.2087087015 100% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 31.8 20.5533526081 155% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.102239574 48.84282405 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 198.6 120.699889404 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8 20.5533526081 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.733333333333 0.644075263715 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 60.3115303983 45.7405998639 132% => OK
Elegance: 1.25 1.45489161554 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373283746516 0.300154397459 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.146600477692 0.103427244359 142% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.094589333896 0.0752933317313 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.60964716008 0.497263757937 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.134937303482 0.151897553556 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163755216992 0.114077575197 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701310055204 0.0781384742642 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.317202805946 0.336927656856 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0507296321276 0.067059652881 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249463845493 0.210909579961 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431686504387 0.0618886996521 70% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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