Workers would be happier if they are doing different types of tasks during their workday than doing the same task.
As a matter of fact, people are different and have variety of needs. Some of them prefer to do the same task every day and some of them think otherwise. In my view, I strongly believe that people with same responsibilities in the work are happier.
First and foremost, everybody want to be relax. As each person knows, different tasks will create more stress for workers. People with the same job have always relaxed during workdays. They do not need to learn new things every single day. Consequently, they are more comfortable in their job.
Second, they can be expert in their major. For instance, a worker with a variety of tasks every day, would have less time to spend to learn about each of them, so he/she cannot be that much professional in any major. Furthermore, employers can use these workers for teaching to other beginners. In another word, these employees are a kind of investment for a factory or a company. These kinds of things will make workers happier in their position, because they can feel that they are useful for society, so they will try to be as well as they can.
Last but not least, there is a huge possibility of making mistakes. Workers with different job responsibilities will make more mistakes compare with others. Undoubtedly, more variety is more confusing. For example, I used to read an article about DNA in Scientist magazine. That article was about possibility of a wrong DNA in numerous of them. The author mentioned that although long DNA is good for making variety, there is a bigger chance to make a wrong creature. The author proved it by telling a logical clause: More variety, more mistakes. In companies workers with many mistakes will not be satisfied at all.
To sum up, doing new things not only is hard to do, but also have negative effect on employees. People with determined task will be more satisfied and happy.
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Comments
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Thank you so much. I am looking for your response. I have the Toefl exam in October 29.
You have few grammatical
You have few grammatical issues. But overall, you have good ideas and did essay greatly. You should get around 24 in essay writing.
and Always add a blank line between paragraphs. In TOEFL, the essays will be checked by e-grader too. A good format will help the marks.
Essay evaluation report
everybody want to be relax.
everybody wants to be relaxing.
everybody wants to relax.
Workers with different job responsibilities will make more mistakes compare with others.
Workers with different job responsibilities will make more mistakes compared with others.
doing new things not only is hard to do, but also have negative effect on employees
doing new things not only is hard to do, but also has negative effects on employees
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
Double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 23 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 328 350
No. of Characters: 1493 1500
No. of Different Words: 174 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.256 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.552 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.492 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 96 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 66 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 41 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.261 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.822 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.478 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.268 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.268 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.073 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'kind of', 'as a matter of fact', 'as well as', 'in my view', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.209677419355 0.229887763892 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.145161290323 0.158761421928 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.110215053763 0.0866891130778 127% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0537634408602 0.046263068375 116% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0483870967742 0.0685040099705 71% => OK
Prepositions: 0.14247311828 0.118717715034 120% => OK
Participles: 0.0215053763441 0.0351676179071 61% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60335369433 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0295698924731 0.0309702414327 95% => OK
Particles: 0.00268817204301 0.00188951952338 142% => OK
Determiners: 0.0833333333333 0.0887237588012 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0322580645161 0.0209618222197 154% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0139019557991 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1876.0 2387.08602151 79% => OK
No of words: 327.0 408.028673835 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7370030581 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.318042813456 0.338922669872 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.211009174312 0.251872472559 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.146788990826 0.174417080927 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.103975535168 0.112833075102 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60335369433 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529051987768 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 55.4994249779 59.2087087015 94% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 14.2173913043 20.5533526081 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8058964685 48.84282405 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5652173913 120.699889404 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2173913043 20.5533526081 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.695652173913 0.644075263715 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 35.3183087355 45.7405998639 77% => OK
Elegance: 1.51086956522 1.45489161554 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252225001309 0.300154397459 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.089484021442 0.103427244359 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0818513043312 0.0752933317313 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.43712980067 0.497263757937 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.113562673289 0.151897553556 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074754279865 0.114077575197 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482898736654 0.0781384742642 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.218892598221 0.336927656856 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0419527457978 0.067059652881 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149188690613 0.210909579961 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568074561953 0.0618886996521 92% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.86379928315 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.