The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourists facilities.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two schemes provide information about an island, which is surrounded by a sea, before and after constructing some buildings for tourists.
Overall, it can be noticed that the total length of the island is around 200 Metres. There are some coconut trees on the both sides of it and a beach on the left.
Looking at the details, a big number of tourists facilities were built on the island’s territory. Now a swimming area is available and people can walk from the seashore using new footpath straight to bungalows. Besides, footpaths cover all the necessary routes. A restaurant and a reception are situated between houses for tourists. Vehicle track might be used to deliver visitors right from the pier, which located right in front of the reception. The pier is long and has two sides, which makes it comfortable to go sailing on different small ships.
It is remarkably that no trees were cut to establish those constructions. Another interesting thing is that the right part of the island did not suffer any changes, there are no dwellings at all.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.254901960784 0.220444632235 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.161764705882 0.167888034529 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0686274509804 0.0606518309736 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0245098039216 0.0506257000042 48% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0196078431373 0.118615021944 17% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.117647058824 0.107062808482 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0490196078431 0.041066498444 119% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74281432702 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0196078431373 0.0385302599488 51% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.147058823529 0.0714148451538 206% => Less determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0147058823529 0.0191574576366 77% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0147058823529 0.00930345855455 158% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1069.0 1141.60824742 94% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.134020619 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.90607734807 5.53046319177 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78085437643 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.325966850829 0.284621296913 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.265193370166 0.211203875043 126% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.187845303867 0.133321485273 141% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127071823204 0.0843313296314 151% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74281432702 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662983425414 0.622163163488 107% => OK
Word variations: 68.3181702066 62.8969750728 109% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 12.9587628866 85% => OK
Sentence length: 16.4545454545 16.4300151701 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.5637268846 44.7399317507 57% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1818181818 90.9928171075 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.4300151701 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.454545454545 0.613754768223 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.09278350515 48% => OK
Readability: 42.9738824711 37.5504026743 114% => OK
Elegance: 2.04761904762 1.13073093955 181% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423780466707 0.331212695627 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0889444441725 0.0927372745006 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0574690293252 0.0736520305886 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.573726933501 0.579516596996 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.207740535795 0.180689518051 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178238513234 0.122183219658 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911930871043 0.0765303033291 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.258152594816 0.211926503985 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0959946022458 0.0737400523855 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285895656576 0.203819188451 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0926319414756 0.067151250289 138% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.45360824742 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.0206185567 149% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 4.73195876289 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.56701030928 117% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 8.32989690722 60% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.