The bar chart illustrates the percentage of male and female who acquired a post-graduate qualification in Australia in 1999. The different levels of post-graduate qualification include skilled vocational diploma, undergraduate diploma, bachelor's degree, postgraduate diploma and master degree.
Few female was granted skilled vocational diploma, which the percentage is 10%. On the contrast, a large percentage of female acquired undergraduate diploma, which is s significant 70%. The percentage of women who was confered hige level degree like bechalor's degree, postgraduate degree and master degree are 50%, 30% and 40% respectively.
The percentage of male who acquired skilled vocational diploma is magnificently large, that is 90%. Likewise, men dominented the domain of higher lever education of postgraduate diploma and master degree, the percentages of which are 70% and 60% respectively. The percentage of male who have undergraduate diploma and bachelor's degree are 35% and 40% respectively.
In comparison, female dominented the fields of undergraduate diploma and bachelor's degree. In the mean time, male outstanded on the both ends of education.
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'likewise', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.340909090909 0.268076937826 127% => OK
Verbs: 0.118181818182 0.116061578633 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0818181818182 0.0759168565197 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0181818181818 0.0366838410393 50% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.0818181818182 0.155750635184 53% => OK
Participles: 0.0181818181818 0.0379272487307 48% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.5683058551 2.65546596893 134% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0 0.0210936926555 0% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0727272727273 0.0948980150116 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0363636363636 0.00967000014798 376% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1190.0 1161.00487805 102% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.9 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.95906432749 5.90752243213 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73763899035 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.46783625731 0.337110787985 139% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.374269005848 0.247514529752 151% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.286549707602 0.171178102325 167% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.228070175439 0.112407865282 203% => Too many words length more than 8 chars.
Word Length SD: 3.5683058551 2.65546596893 134% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461988304094 0.546246751206 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 36.7457671086 49.3433353143 74% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 8.93414634146 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.1 23.0094962315 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6654006179 42.9750493124 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 135.714022679 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 23.0094962315 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.3 0.689975730869 43% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 54.5269005848 47.7609492067 114% => OK
Elegance: 3.23333333333 2.94281807926 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425636047607 0.418131533498 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.198805288704 0.181151798455 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.114872698143 0.0850326197045 135% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.660190193069 0.706616315825 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0862126827244 0.157042692854 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.23278134434 0.228904883108 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113777556032 0.108899403657 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.479570617955 0.367819155151 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0726743884506 0.0812612215331 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.333605607204 0.316326947829 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813287968335 0.0921553760075 88% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70731707317 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.16585365854 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.02926829268 132% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 7.1512195122 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.