In the above memorandum business manager of a television station is thinking only in single perspective, It is fine, but supporting his/her idea will be flaw.
As It is a late night news program and there will be very less people watching the television at this time and this could be the reason for which local businesses thought advertising at the late night is not significant and to save their budget they might have withdrawn their contracts.
And there might be some other program which is been broadcasted in some other channel at the same time at which this late night news program is telecasting and that program might be found to be interesting for people rather than this, so local businesses might thought that it would be fine to telecast there advertisements in between the other program and might have with drawn the contract from this channel.
And people who are watching this late night news might require the weather news to plan their journey for tomorrow which can be broadcasted with in the same international news program.Either the local news and whether news and international news can be broadcasted at the same time by managing the stipulated time for each.
So, to evaluate the reason for decreasing in the revenues we have to know what kind of people are watching the late news and what they were interested and why did they were interested and also have to know does any other program is broadcasted in any other channel at the same time which has more viewers than this and also manager has to know why the local businesses have withdrawn their contracts from this channel.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... perspective, It is fine, but supporting his/her idea will be flaw. As It is a...
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Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
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Suggestion: fewer
...ght news program and there will be very less people watching the television at this ...
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...sements in between the other program and might have with drawn the contract from ...
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Suggestion: Either
... in the same international news program.Either the local news and whether news and int...
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...managing the stipulated time for each. So, to evaluate the reason for decreasin...
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...lso have to know does any other program is broadcasted in any other channel at the...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'as to', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.202090592334 0.25644967241 79% => OK
Verbs: 0.19512195122 0.15541462614 126% => OK
Adjectives: 0.108013937282 0.0836205057962 129% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0313588850174 0.0520304965353 60% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0418118466899 0.0272364105082 154% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.11149825784 0.125424944231 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0592334494774 0.0416121511921 142% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6010875686 2.79052419416 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0278745644599 0.026700313972 104% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.114982578397 0.113004496875 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0418118466899 0.0255425247493 164% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0348432055749 0.0127820249294 273% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1615.0 2731.13054187 59% => OK
No of words: 278.0 446.07635468 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80935251799 6.12365571057 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.57801047555 89% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.251798561151 0.378187486979 67% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.219424460432 0.287650121315 76% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.147482014388 0.208842608468 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.10071942446 0.135150697306 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6010875686 2.79052419416 93% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 207.018472906 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.413669064748 0.469332199767 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 38.6246433068 52.1807786196 74% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 20.039408867 25% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 55.6 23.2022227129 240% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 94.766238714 57.7814097925 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 323.0 141.986410481 227% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.6 23.2022227129 240% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.2 0.724660767414 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.58251231527 167% => OK
Readability: 77.5424460432 51.9672348444 149% => OK
Elegance: 1.38961038961 1.8405768891 75% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.4803563472 0.441005458295 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.323572408862 0.135418324435 239% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.109617610067 0.0829849096947 132% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.58762219726 170% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 1.9860273226e-16 0.147661913831 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.317096534039 0.193483328276 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938484432212 0.0970749176394 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.354879981186 0.42659136922 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.128631542954 0.0774707102158 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.317096534039 0.312017818177 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938484432212 0.0698173142475 134% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.33743842365 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.87684729064 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.82512315271 21% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 6.46551724138 62% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 5.36822660099 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.82389162562 35% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 14.657635468 34% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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