TPO 11 - Question 2 Some people think that children should be allowed to watch whatever television programs they choose to. Others think that parents should exercise control over the television programs their children watch. Which do you agree with? Expla

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reason one has only one sentence. too short.

don't need this sentence: i have couple of reasons from top of my head. We only need two transition words:

First, ....
Second....

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