Should visiting foreigners adopt some attitudes, behavior and cultural patterns of a host country or locals should about foreigners in the same case? what are your views?
The idea in the statement presents two choices. Going to extremes in both cases would be creating a rift and problems in them rather than a better solution. Taking the middle view, provides a brighter scope of considering the issue from the more acceptable point of view by asking why not lend a chance for the two sides understand the fruit of new experience?
To put the matter into proper perspective,in the time of globalization, mutual interests are more important than one sided interests. Neither the locals can be compel or stress too much on local patterns of interaction for foreigners nor foreigners can gain anything substantial without being a part of local cultures.The matter calls for wider exposure to life and humanity.
To elucidate the matter further, the locals can motivate the foreigners to learn the basic folkways without burdening the process of learning at least for better communication in the concerned local environment for desirable ends. Similarly, locals can understand the foreigners'requirements by learning something of a new and diffrent order from them. wouldn't this mutual arrangement benefit the two sides?
To prove the point of mutual benefit it would be worth asking oneself how a local,at some point in life may have to visit a foreign country expects the same treatment from foreigners? Surely he would,therby proving a beneficial experience of mutual adjustment.
To sum up my view points,these days the demarcation between local and international is vanishing as the world heads towards one culture of humanity.An opinion thus formed on the basis of above considerations,favors a strong idea of accepting that understanding and cooperation remains the key solution for the benefit of larger social,national and international interests.
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Sentence: Similarly, locals can understand the foreigners'requirements by learning something of a new and diffrent order from them. wouldn't this mutual arrangement benefit the two sides?
Error: wouldn't Suggestion: would not
Error: diffrent Suggestion: different
Great essay! Nice polished language and good ideas!
This essay can get around 8 in real IELTS exam.
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