Censorship is necessary in modern society
A considerable but interesting controversy at present is existence of censorship in modern society. A bunch of people strongly recommend it, whilst others are against it. Since the matter is so debatable, we should enlighten both the sides before deriving any conclusion over this fact.
To begin with, have you ever consider the fact that, any product available in the market needs to pass minimum quality standards, set by either government body or any independent organisation. Similarly, quality of media, reaching to the society, also required a quality assurance. Every media contents needs ...
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Please suggest some more improvements in the essay!!
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Everything is great! my only
Everything is great! my only suggestion is that you may need to consider the time since there are only 30 minutes for one essay in real exams of IELTS writing!
You are welcome! and we have
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Dear all, I am very delighted
Dear all,
I am very delighted to join this site and it is obvious great efforts have been made here. I would like to share this essay question taken from insights into Ielts:
''Mobiles have changed the way many people communicate. Nowadays, people cannot live without them.
To what extent do you agree or disagree? ''
My question is, when we see '' to what extent...'', should we argue both sides of the coin? or Should we argue only ''against'' or ''for'' ,
Or probably either way?
Thanks
You can choose any way you
You can choose any way you mentioned above. There are no great differences.
Pattern 1:
para 1: introduction
para 2: In one hand...
para 3: On the other hand ...
para 4: conclusion and my opinion
pattern 2:
para 1: i agree/disagree
para 2: reason 1...
para 3: reason 2...
para 4: reason 3...
para 5: because of reason 1,2,3, so i agree/disagree...
The evaluations for this essay:
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Score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 398 350
No. of Characters: 2061 1500
No. of Different Words: 215 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.467 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.178 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.779 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 162 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 125 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 84 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 54 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.9 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.46 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.287 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.613 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.096 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5
Hi ashwani1982, did you write this essay in 40 minutes?