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The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the republic of Freedonia.
Write a report for a university teacher describing the information shown.
You should write at least 150 words.
The given chart illustrates the employment in the republic of Freedonia in thousands by both sexes in six sectors in 1975 and 1995. In 1975, the number of man employees excludes the female employees’ number in all sectors, whereas after two decades the women employment exceeds men in two sectors, wholesale and retail sector and communications.
In 1975, the public sector (defense), the number of women employment was only 25000 and male employment was 210,000, which was of four folds more than that of female employment. It shows a significant improvement in the female employment in this sec...
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Score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 9
No. of Words: 232 200
No. of Characters: 1163 900
No. of Different Words: 91 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.903 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.013 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.78 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 80 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 60 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 42 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.63 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.3 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.555 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.688 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.25 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4