tpo 22
the outer states that ethanol isn't efficient for using due to some reasons however, the lecture says that ethanol can be used as an alternative replacement for gasoline fuel.
first, the reading explains that using ethanol fuel may not decrease the global warming because ethanol have in common gasoline fuel releasing carbon dioxide. thus ethanol can't solve environmental problem. in contrast, the lecture, explains that using ethanol can decline the carbon dioxide in atmosphere. ethanol produces from plants like corn. these procedure can accumulate much co2 in the air.
the reading says that production of ethanol may use amount of plane can cause to reduce the number of planet. by increasing consume of planet s some specious may be in exposed to distinction. conversely, the lecture climes that in the processes pf production of ethanol much unusable planet may used and it isn’t a danger for various species.
finally, the outer explains that ethanol it is not capable for ethanol to compete with gasoline on price. the government gives subsides to ethanol for having the same price in contrast to gasoline fuel. on the contrary, the lecture stats that ethanol can compete with gasoline on price. according to recent researches consuming ethanol is progressing and it can be caused to producing more that past because of these reason the price of ethanol will be reduced
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The
the outer states that ethanol isnt efficien...
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Suggestion: isn't
the outer states that ethanol isnt efficient for using due to some reasons...
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Suggestion: First
...ative replacement for gasoline fuel. first, the reading explains that using ethano...
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Suggestion: Thus
...gasoline fuel releasing carbon dioxide. thus ethanol cant solve environmental proble...
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Suggestion: thus,
...gasoline fuel releasing carbon dioxide. thus ethanol cant solve environmental proble...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
... releasing carbon dioxide. thus ethanol cant solve environmental problem. in contras...
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...hanol cant solve environmental problem. in contrast, the lecture, explains that us...
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Suggestion: Ethanol
...cline the carbon dioxide in atmosphere. ethanol produces from plants like corn. these p...
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Suggestion: this procedure; these procedures
...ethanol produces from plants like corn. these procedure can accumulate much co2 in the air. ...
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...can accumulate much co2 in the air. the reading says that production of ethanol...
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... production of ethanol may use amount of plane can cause to reduce the number of ...
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Message: Did you mean 'reducing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: reducing
...anol may use amount of plane can cause to reduce the number of planet. by increasing con...
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...n cause to reduce the number of planet. by increasing consume of planet s some spe...
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...cious may be in exposed to distinction. conversely, the lecture climes that in the process...
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...anol to compete with gasoline on price. the government gives subsides to ethanol fo...
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...ame price in contrast to gasoline fuel. on the contrary, the lecture stats that et...
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...nol can compete with gasoline on price. according to recent researches consuming ethanol ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, finally, first, however, may, so, thus, in contrast, in contrast to, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 1373.03311258 85% => OK
No of words: 225.0 270.72406181 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20444444444 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58667430316 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 145.348785872 82% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528888888889 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 419.366225166 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2744425469 49.2860985944 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0769230769 110.228320801 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3076923077 21.698381199 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06452816374 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 4.19205298013 453% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.526669566231 0.272083759551 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.222767405295 0.0996497079465 224% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110521063372 0.0662205650399 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.35657217863 0.162205337803 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951840862672 0.0443174109184 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.8541721854 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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