Nowadays more and more children acquire unhealthy eating habits. Why is it happening? What can be done to solve this issue?
Nowadays children are developing bad habits of eating unhealthy food. As a result, they are succumbed to various diseases such as obesity, diabetes and heart diseases at such tender age. There are enormous reasons persuading children to eat junk food. However, by applying available measures, we could prevent pupils from such bad eating habits.
To begin, the prime cause of such scenario is attractive food adverts on television. For instance, children get influenced by seeing tempting food on TV and pressurize their parents to buy the same. Moreover, there are numerous food outlets opened across the country, which promote unhealthy food and they mostly target innocent children by keeping fancy food on display. Subsequently, these food outlets add preservatives and unhealthy ingredients to make food tasty, therefore, children find such food more delicious than homemade food. Finally, to some extent, parents are responsible for this situation as to avoid cooking at home due to work pressure, they prefer to eat outside with children and spoil their habits.
There are many precautions available to improve the situation. Firstly, parents could play a vital role by providing children healthy food at home in a fun way. Secondly, by educating children about the consequences of eating junk food, we could curb the problem. Lastly, governments ought to publish guidelines to regulate the food business, and impose strict law against those who play with children's health by serving unhealthy food.
To conclude, I believe that the collective efforts of parents and governments, we could make the situation better. In addition, individual awareness is another important aspect to reduce the consumption of unhealthy food among the children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a fun way" with adverb for "fun"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...providing children healthy food at home in a fun way. Secondly, by educating children about ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47058823529 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74546456762 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599264705882 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2900326631 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145059685022 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578046746972 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518675577863 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924769763142 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327269418092 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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