Motoways provides a better choice than regular roads when people rush to a long distance destination because people can drive with high speed and avoid stoping an crossroad as driving on normal roads do. However, the convenience of highway also causes problems. And measures need to take to eschew this problems. This essay will discuss about the problems and suggest possible solutions.
The prominent problems when drving on highway are high speed driving and the resultant car collision. Normally, the speed limit of motorway is 100 KM/h and 120KM/h that are actually extremely high speed. Driving in such high speed seaily causes car crash if the driver is careless due to distraction or weary. For example, a second of unattention will leave the car drive 30 meters without control, which probebly result in colliding with the front car.
Viable solution to the motorway problem is erecting adequent road sighs to remind drivers about the upcoming change of road condition. For instance, a road sign regarding the next converge of drive lane prompt drivers to pay attention to the adjasent cars. Additionally, a road sigh of next curvy road will remind the drivers to slow down the car to prevent driving out of lane. With sufficient road signs, drivers will be safer on the road.
To recapitulate, highways facilitate the commute of people who need to arrive their destination urgently. However, it also causes problems. Driving in high speed is extremely dangerous if the driver are not entirely focus on the road. One possible solution to this problem is that the road admistrive must install enough placard to warn drivers about the next change of driving condition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Line 1, column 299, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ms. And measures need to take to eschew this problems. This essay will discuss about...
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Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 7, column 38, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... To recapitulate, highways facilitate the commute of people who need to arrive their dest...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, regarding, second, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11231884058 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5352249554 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547101449275 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9402476745 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1875 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125625427969 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555436432482 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610129383958 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875774504918 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435752030948 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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