The argument makes a number of unwarranted assumptions regarding replacement of time slot allotted to the late-night news with the earlier weather report and local news. Taken as a whole, these unstated assumptions render the argument highly suspect. Indeed, if these unstated assumptions do not hold true, then argument totally falls apart.
The argument assumes due to longer time period allotted to late-night news program instead of local and weather news, people are complaining about station’s coverage of weather and local news. it may be possible that they are concerned just regarding the quality or content of weather and local news. There’s no confirmation that viewers are dissatisfied with an on-going schedule of the channel.
The argument also assumes that there’s relation between show timings and cancellation of advertising contracts of local businesses. It may be possible that it’s just a coincidence the local businesses can no more afford to advertise on this channel as other channels are doing it for cheaper price irrespective of the program they are running.
Also, There’s no surety about arguments assumption that after restoring the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level, it will attract more viewers and business
As stated above argument makes a number of unstated assumptions. Secondly, Channels business and popularity may have been reduced, but author’s argument rest on faulty assumptions that may be proven false, and with the reasons given cannot be safely concluded that the restoration action will bring back channels earlier glory
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: shacharm
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: It
...s;s coverage of weather and local news. it may be possible that they are concerned...
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Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...n that viewers are dissatisfied with an on-going schedule of the channel. The argument ...
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...t will attract more viewers and business As stated above argument makes a number ...
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...n will bring back channels earlier glory
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 55.5748502994 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 2260.96107784 61% => OK
No of words: 249.0 441.139720559 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53815261044 5.12650576532 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.56307096286 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8973391726 2.78398813304 104% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 204.123752495 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55421686747 0.468620217663 118% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 705.55239521 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.471057884232 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 19.7664670659 51% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.8343273274 57.8364921388 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.9 119.503703932 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 23.324526521 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.70786347227 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.20758483034 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306565934723 0.218282227539 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135863083613 0.0743258471296 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137274832545 0.0701772020484 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187265487427 0.128457276422 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140641224417 0.0628817314937 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 14.3799401198 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.3550499002 80% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.197005988 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.5979740519 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.32208582834 116% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 98.500998004 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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