"It is often asserted that the purpose of education is to free the mind and the spirit. In reality, however, formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free."
Formal education can create a background of every field in the mind of students and it can help them to find their way easier. A child learns whatever is taught him by his parents or his teachers. This is an indisputable fact that, a child can be impressed by his around environment and it's a reality that every child has right to think independently. So formal education for children in some case may be useful and even formal education may be harmful and take children from free thinking power. Formal education for taking upper grades and for going upper levels in the school may be effective but effectiveness is not enough singly and cause children to stick their books with this fear that, may not pass the term.
We have to admit that, formal education is not that thing in our mind that we think about it and it is a way for showing success. A child has an independent mind and he can uses his mind beside formal education so, formal education don't restrain children's mind. It might be true that, a child during his education in a school should obey some rules and these rules help him to find his way easier. So, it cannot be denied that, formal education create a path for children and it cannot restrain children's mind. Paralleling it's advantages, some believes that formal education in some cases is harmful for their children.
With all that said, relying excessively on formal education may take children power of thinking and children inure to
a path and obey from that. Undoubtedly, formal education restrain children's mind and their spirit too. For instance, imagine a person who passed all of his education in different institute with a special rule, how can he face with society's problem?.
Admittedly, all great civilization have had flourishing people who were talent and they had independent mind. Moreover, with pros and cons, it is important let children to have free mind without of any considering punishment for who doesn't obey from formal education. Formal education should be designed in a manner that help children to have free mind and use their spare time to innovation not spare their time to do more exercise.
Consequently, Formal education can't help children to have free mind and spirit because of it's hard rules just it can design a path for children to obey them. These rules adhere children and because they have no option and for going upper levels should stick to their books.
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- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. 66
- Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study because acquiring knowledge of various academic disciplines is the best way to become truly educated. 66
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 50
- Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed. 50
- In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: help them find
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...impressed by his around environment and its a reality that every child has right to...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
...hild has an independent mind and he can uses his mind beside formal education so, fo...
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Suggestion: don't
...e formal education so, formal education dont restrain childrens mind. It might be tr...
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Suggestion: help him find
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ercise. Consequently, Formal education cant help children to have free mind and spi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, may, moreover, so, for instance, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2006.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 419.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78758949881 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53642137539 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.424821002387 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 614.7 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6187778217 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.444444444 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2777777778 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249076035671 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109171815469 0.0831039109588 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885978323989 0.0758088955206 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153067271034 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482903852297 0.0667264976115 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.