It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay?
It has a quite importance for a human to have an efficient childhood. That is possible with quality opportunities. I believe that we can improve ourselves with good facillities throughout our life. Additionally for having a comfortable future, education has a crucial role as a cornerstone and social life brings to personality a flexible charecteristics. Therefore i totally disagree with the statement of that it is better for children to grow up in the countryside instead of growing up in a big city.
Initially, for a child, it is quite importante to have facilities nearby. While growing up, a child needs services such as medical, transportation for needs and parks. If a child lives and grows up in a countryside, these services aren’t accesible for him. He is supposed to travel somewhere else having needed facilities. I infer from that since children probably want to visit a park for enjoy and they absulately need medical services, it is more beneficial to live in a big city for them.
Secondly, and most importantly, every child wants to create a substantial future and they have dreams for the future. It is well established that a quality education makes it possible. Moreover education is not only significant for a good future but it is also important for a great life mind and general culture. Therefore children having dreams for a bright future, want to access quality education which is contained in big cities. Eventually growing up in a big city gives the quality education inherently.
The third point i would like to make is that children are supposed to have a good social life throughout their childhood age. By having a good social life, they are far away from depression and more appropriate to have a satisfied life. I believe that while children are growing up, it is better for them to live in a big city as big cities have various social lifes.
All in all, i believe that it has a quite importance for children to live in a big city instead of living in a countryside because of the reasons of accesible facilities in big cities, a quality education opportunity and colorful social life in big cities. Then they will be enjoying their life willingly when they grow up.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86807387863 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94801013891 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46437994723 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 611.1 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7309124153 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.25 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.95 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227809573593 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793550389448 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922816115483 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147702131053 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355276785396 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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