Art is considered an essential part of all culture throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business.
Why do you think this is? What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?
Art has played a key role in the development of human civilization. Nevertheless, nowadays society has started to give its attention to other fields such as modern technology and business and this has reduced the importance of art considerably. This essay will discuss about the reasons for this change and the ways to make fine-art a prime aspect of human life.
Foremost reason for this shift is that, understanding the laws of nature has aided in the betterment of the humanity. For instance, without the invention of satellites; live-telecommunication and global positioning systems would have been beyond the bounds of possibilities. This has made scientific knowledge a trend.
Moreover, being an entrepreneur provides a better financial status to a person than being an artist. For a person who is denied of the basic needs of life, art will be the last thing that comes to his mind. Whereas, equipping him with some business skill will improve his standard of life.
In order to restore artwork to its lost glory, it should be used as tool to point out the evils of the society, as it was in the olden days. Creativity should be bound with tradition and social responsibility, so that it is not seen just as an accessory in a collector’s luxury apartment, but also as the voice of people against the flaws of the community.
In a nutshell, while technology and trade benefit the society by making our life sophisticated, we have to understand that artwork can be used to call the attention of the public towards world issues. This will make art one of the paramount features of our daily life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 208, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the last thing that comes to his mind. Whereas, equipping him with some business skill...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, whereas, while, as to, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93795620438 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05477068769 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591240875912 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7365881772 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.076923077 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144106722206 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509106945866 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306210015114 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743655287243 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326541853119 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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