Groups and organizations are an important part of some people’s lives. Why are groups and organizations important to people?
These days, most people would like to join various groups and organization and they have very different reasons for what they do. There are also countless groups and organizations in the world and people can benefit from them in different ways. In the following paragraphs, I will try to explain some advantages of joining an organization and the importance of groups in our lives.
First and foremost, people form groups in order to meet their basic needs. For example, a family is a primary group in the society and it consists of parents and children. Children have to live with their parents because fathers and mothers can meet children’ necessary needs like food, cloth, shelter, etc. Undoubtedly, children cannot live independently and without the help of their parents and parents need children because they can take care of them when they become old and disable.
In the second place, people would like to join some groups because they want to learn fundamental skills. For example, in my country, high school students join clubs during summer vacation a. In these groups, they will learn how to behave toward other people with different cultures and backgrounds. In addition, students meet new people and make friends and in my opinion, these activities have positive influences on their minds.
Last but not least, some groups provide people with a great chance to reach their goals. For example, students form groups in universities and they share their opinions about assignments and do their homework easily and in a more convenient way. Furthermore, after graduation, they join different organizations because they want to work and obtain money.
Taking all the aforementioned arguments into account, it can be concluded that people form groups and join organizations because they can meet their needs, reach their goals and other reasons which I outlined above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget something after 'a'?
...dents join clubs during summer vacation a. In these groups, they will learn how to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, for example, in addition, in my opinion, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19344262295 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66558385254 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537704918033 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5339416008 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.6 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291930122585 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116432050045 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955854629279 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183876322432 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117961042393 0.0645574589148 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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