Technology has commenced to use frequently since its invention.This essay will demonstrate that it is positive aspect which utilizing this opportunity people become to be more knowledgeable. There are some unique benefit of using technology such as high accessibility any sort of information and increasing work efficiency, by following it, being idle and decreasing interaction ability are the essential drawbacks.
Firstly, a computer is available in all areas of our life. It is undeniable that, it is the best route to make progress in study or work places. For example, some lectures and scientific presentations are provided by some universities which has a huge impact on developing young generation. On the other by using computer industry and other workplaces can manage their time and it decreases the employer's burden.
Those opposed to this say that, it causes people to become idle, because they try to avoid doing any physical activity which can treat their body. Likewise, most people prefer interacting via devices rather than face to face, therefore communication is an actual problem among people.
Overall, it is a vital part of the modern world which people more likely to enhance their ability in educational and other spheres. In additional, they should be careful not to be addicted from it. For instance, authorities and big companies would encourage people to do some exercises and spend their free time more effectively.
To sum up, there is no doubt that after using computer people can achieve their aim faster than in the past and it creates more advantageous in their life but they should be aware that technology cannot hindrance their other abilties
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, likewise, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, no doubt, sort of, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22878228782 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89166134159 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630996309963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9430641201 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.083333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 51.0 5.01903807615 1016% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0715832628308 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0254155240171 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0194245598988 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0392572343724 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00985695342578 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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