People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their gardens. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
In this era, people's life style is become more complex due to modern life. People in modern life have to work under pressure. Their have to work hard to pay the bills. So, they need to recover themselves to have a sustainable performance in their job. Many of people go to cinema to watch latest movies; many of them prefer to jog, many like to listen music or go to concerts. Personally, I prefer to be in nature or read my favorite book . As I experienced, these activities made me revealed.
First of all, being in nature like go to jungle and sight sees are very amusing and effective to free your mind from day life's events. As the nature is quiet and calm, some interesting things may happen that can be funny and disappear stress. For example, I remember that once I went to jungle at the weekend, and as I was walking through the dense trees, suddenly a funny rabbit jumped across on my way and stared me with fear, then, it ran away. As I love rabbits, I followed it. The rabbit was faster but I was fast too. It goes to a cave that I didn't discover it yet. I let the rabbit go and started to the cave. It was big one with beautiful scene. I found some of the first humans paintings and called one of my friends who is a Paleontologist. He was shocked too because the paintings was new and just painted by some of the shepherds. We laughed a lot and my friends make joke of that. After that, I was in a good mood for several weeks and went to the cave every week. So, as mentioned, being in the nature can decrease the stress and even convert it to happiness.
Furthermore, I winter that weather is cold and snowy, I try to read my favorite books. When I read book, I use my imagination to put myself as first character of book of the character that I like it. Then, I try to act his or even her role in a real scene. This make me happy and withdraw pressure and stress. In some cases, it helps us to cure our family member's depression. Sometimes, I ask my wife and son to some the roles. It is really funny and we have great time when we act. For instance, last week my son asked me to read his favorite book, Robin Hood. We invited my uncle for lunch. My son insisted to play the role of the book. So, I was the little John, my wife was the Maria, my uncle was the King and my son was the Robin Hood. When my son took all of the King's money, my stingy uncle was shocked and tried to get monies back but he was stated to spend all of his money for tomorrow's lunch and invite his old girlfriend to have a meal with us. If he didn't have any girlfriend, he had to pick one immediately! My uncles, who was suffered from depression, told me that it was best weekend ever he had. Now, we read a book every week and act instead of one the characters. This week's book is the Alice in wonderland. My uncle feels much better now. As you seen, reading books can reduce stress too.
In conclusion, go to the nature and walking between trees, drinking fresh water from springs and following animals like rabbits as well as reading books and become an actor is very effective in my and my family's mind healthiness. As our psychologist told us, we are really a happy family in spite of work and modern life's extreme pressure. So, as a suggestion, if you want to enjoy our life and put away stress and this complex pressure, just do funny things and just do everything you like. If you laugh to the world, the world will laugh to you too.
- People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries. 73
- Agree or disagree? Visiting museums is the best way to get information about a country. 86
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 88
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents or other adult relatives should make important decisions for their older (15 to 18 year-old) teenage children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 87
- TPO 28 Integrated 88
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 284, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'watch the latest'.
Suggestion: watch the latest
...eir job. Many of people go to cinema to watch latest movies; many of them prefer to jog, man...
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Line 1, column 439, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...to be in nature or read my favorite book . As I experienced, these activities made...
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Line 3, column 550, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... was fast too. It goes to a cave that I didnt discover it yet. I let the rabbit go an...
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Line 3, column 663, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...s big one with beautiful scene. I found some of the first humans paintings and called one o...
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Line 3, column 821, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...e paintings was new and just painted by some of the shepherds. We laughed a lot and my frie...
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Line 5, column 760, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...on was the Robin Hood. When my son took all of the Kings money, my stingy uncle was shocke...
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Line 5, column 965, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...irlfriend to have a meal with us. If he didnt have any girlfriend, he had to pick one...
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Line 5, column 1268, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'saw'?
Suggestion: saw
... My uncle feels much better now. As you seen, reading books can reduce stress too. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, really, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, in some cases, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 35.0 13.8261648746 253% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 101.0 43.0788530466 234% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2778.0 1977.66487455 140% => OK
No of words: 663.0 407.700716846 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.19004524887 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.07432619952 4.48103885553 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32514318397 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 307.0 212.727598566 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463046757164 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 878.4 618.680645161 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 34.0 9.59856630824 354% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 13.0 3.51792114695 370% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 41.0 20.6003584229 199% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2304732894 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.756097561 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1707317073 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.70731707317 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157814161308 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409533108434 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485578420802 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109484462145 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327671005024 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 58.1214874552 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.73 10.9000537634 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes. We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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