You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter
• give details of your course and your arrival/departure date
• explain your accommodation needs
• ask for information about getting to and from the college
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to ask for information about your accommodation situation in this semester.
I am going to apply a short programming course in nest semester. This course is settled by engineering college for first four week of the next spring semester. I hope arrive there on first week of February. I do not know anyone at your town, so I need to stay in an accommodation. I need some facilities for my accommodation include the unlimited access to the internet, my own bathroom. Besides, I would like to have a single room, if it was possible. Could you please me how much it cost, and how can I pay it.? Should I pay my whole rent before arrived? Can I pay with credit card?
Moreover, I will fly to your city, could you tell me how can I getting your accommodation from airport? Can I use public transport like bus or train?
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Mari.
<script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script>
- It is believe that the traffic police should apply heavy fines to driver violating the traffic regulation in order to decrease the numbers of road accident. Do you agree or disagree with his idea? 62
- You have bought a mobile phone in a tax free shop just a few days ago and it doesn t work properly Task write a letter to the manager to complain about it and ask him to solve the problem 87
- Many people have to retire at the age 60 or 65. However, some suggest that these people should be allowed to work for as long as they wish. What are the pros and cons of this situation? 59
- Some people say that it is not good for children to grow up in the city and that the countryside is more suitable for them. Do you agree or disagree? Support your view with relevant examples. 50
- Write a letter to your manager and ask for his her comments regarding the article which will be published in a famous magazine next month In this letter you should say What have you written the article about Why did you write it What makes it so special 73
Sentence: I need some facilities for my accommodation include the unlimited access to the internet, my own bathroom.
Description: The fragment accommodation include the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace include with including
flaws:
No. of Words: 153 200
More words wanted.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 9
No. of Words: 153 200
No. of Characters: 651 900
No. of Different Words: 102 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.517 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.255 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.697 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 39 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 27 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 19 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 11 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 12.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.854 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.417 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.428 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.538 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.198 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4