You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter
• give details of your course and your arrival/departure date
• explain your accommodation needs
• ask for information about getting to and from the college
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to ask for information about your accommodation situation in this semester.
I am going to apply a short programming course in nest semester. This course is settled by engineering college for first four week of the next spring semester. I hope arrive there on first week of February. I do not know anyone at your town, so I need to stay in an accommodation. I need some facilities for my accommodation include the unlimited access to the internet, my own bathroom. Besides, I would like to have a single room, if it was possible. Could you please me how much it cost, and how can I pay it.? Should I pay my whole rent before arrived? Can I pay with credit card?
Moreover, I will fly to your city, could you tell me how can I getting your accommodation from airport? Can I use public transport like bus or train?
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Mari.
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Sentence: I need some facilities for my accommodation include the unlimited access to the internet, my own bathroom.
Description: The fragment accommodation include the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace include with including
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More words wanted.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Words: 153 200
No. of Characters: 651 900
No. of Different Words: 102 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.517 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.255 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.697 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 19 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 11 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 12.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.854 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.428 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.538 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.198 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4