You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of visit.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
-Explain the important
-Apologize for the situation
-Suggest a new arrangement
Dear William,
I am writing this letter to you to inform that my visit at your place on January 24, 2016 will not push through due to the reason that I will be attending the wedding of my sister Astrude, and I will be one of the groomsmen. They had just decided last month that they want to get marry because her future husband will be leaving on February for his work.
I know you had made some arrangement on the place where we will be staying and was able to pay the reservation fee. I express my deepest apology for this matter since we have been planning this last year. I will just pay all you your expenses and will send the payment on your bank account. May I ask If we can reschedule my trip to your place this coming September 6, 2016. Me and my wife, Fiona, would like to go there and want to celebrate our anniversary. Hoping that we could see each other .
Your buddy,
Juvan Ancheta
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...liam, I am writing this letter to you to inform that my visit at your place on...
^^
Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e we have been planning this last year. I will just pay all you your expenses and...
^
Line 5, column 496, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ary. Hoping that we could see each other . Your buddy, Juvan Ancheta
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 734.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26744186047 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17907575477 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639534883721 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2317065576 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5555555556 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.22222222222 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141615582709 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559265589064 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451069616587 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105304813305 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00464258660557 0.0580467560999 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.