You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The bar charts below show the Marriage and Divorce Statistics for nine countries in 1981 and 1994.
Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
Write at least 150 words.
The bar graph illustrates the dynamic in the greatest quantity of elephants in nine Asian countries from 1997 to 2004.
It is clear that over the following 7 years, elephant populations declined in most of the countries. While India always had the highest number of elephants, this figure in China was the lowest in both years.
In 1997, there were around 10000 elephants in India, followed by Myanmar, Thailand and Malaysia, with 5200, 3800 and 3000, respectively. 2004 witnessed dramatic decreases in the population of elephants in three countries mentioned, especially Malaysia and Myanmar, in which these figures dropped by nearly three quarters. Cambodia is the only country where elephants showed signs of growth in the quantity, from 1200 to 1300 over the 7-year period.
The quantity of elephants in Vietnam and Laos did not change in general, at approximately 1100 in both years. China only had an insignificant number of elephants, just about 500 in 2004.
- The graph below shows the changes in maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007. 78
- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The bar charts below show the Marriage and Divorce Statistics for nine countries in 1981 and 1994.Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.Write at least 150 words 11
- The chart below shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006 74
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22292993631 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7510172789 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649681528662 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6687440752 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0557767521011 0.215688989381 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0254625825868 0.103423049105 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0219801347857 0.0843802449381 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0385436418095 0.15604864568 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205628780714 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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