Sentiment differs between a person. There is debate whether teachers should make their political and social opinions aware to students. Teachers , in my opinion, should be allowed to express their views in front of classroom, to the student due to various reasons.
First of all, students are unknown about anything. There are devoid of reasoning, so they don't know how to behave or why should they behave well? Therefore, because teacher plays the vital role in shaping children's behavior, it is responsibility of teacher to make them realize how to behave well(one of the major social aspect). Children are, in Japan, teach to behave well during their first 3 year period of school rather than focusing on their academic development. Furthermore, they can be capable of logical deduction as various teacher represent multiple view of society and politics. For instance, if students are made aware about various political views, he will also be learning about various political views, which can aid him while winnowing favorable views because at that time, he, from his long period experience, can do critical analysis of any sentiment.
Second, Teacher are more experienced than students. Opinions held by them are good because time has tempered their view in good shape. So, teacher always express those opinion that is good and beneficial to entire community. You can take an example of my teacher- In school, in grade 6, our social teacher express his view about race. He said " racial clash will only bring chaos in society,so it should be wiped out". Even though, at that time, I didn't realize the gist of these words, but today I do. Similarly, there are many political and social views of global warming, changing temperature. They, I believe, should be made aware because in future, since they are more likely to confront these devastating problem.
Last but not least, not only teacher but also parents should instill political and social values to their children because it help children during their growing period. As we know that any particular social views are prevalent in society,so teaching them about social values will make child aware about it, and child acts according to it, making an demeanor which is conducive for child growth.
Finally, making a child, capable of reasoning about values, behave well, and act according to society are pivotal factor for future growth of child. All these factors can be obtained by making child known about the political and social views provided by teacher. Thus, I believe teacher should be allowed to utter their opinion to children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, second, similarly, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2189.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12646370023 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45827593614 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533957845433 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9369664433 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4090909091 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.59090909091 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230779336271 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763788864228 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566839139423 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156954656542 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372286670136 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.