The diagram below shows changes of educational backgrounds of employees of a company in 1991, 1996 and 2000. Write a report for the company's general manager describing the information shown in the diagram.
The bar chart illustrates different educational backgrounds number of a company's employees in 1991, 1996 and 2000. The four degrees include secondery, bachelor's, master and PH.D.
As we can see from the diagram, the number of employees who dropped dramatically from 60 in 1991 to 33 in 1996, then it went down to 19 at the end of 2000, less than one in three of that in 1991. While the bachelors tend to change fluctuately from 20 in 1991 to the peak at 43 in 1996 and then it decreases to 33 in 2000. In conteary, masters and PH.Ds have the same rise trend and both are a sharp increase after a slight rise. Specifically, master employees' number was 2 in 1991, after a domest increas to 5 in 1996, it went up to 25 in 2000, meanwhile, PH.D staff number is 0 in 1991, four years later in 1996, there was only one PH.D staff ,which less than 5 in 2000.
Overall, employees are increasingly number of high educational backgrounds.
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Sentence: The bar chart illustrates different educational backgrounds number of a company's employees in 1991, 1996 and 2000.
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Sentence: The four degrees include secondery, bachelor's, master and PH.D.
Error: secondery Suggestion: secondary
Sentence: As we can see from the diagram, the number of employees who dropped dramatically from 60 in 1991 to 33 in 1996, then it went down to 19 at the end of 2000, less than one in three of that in 1991.
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Sentence: While the bachelors tend to change fluctuately from 20 in 1991 to the peak at 43 in 1996 and then it decreases to 33 in 2000.
Error: fluctuately Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: In conteary, masters and PH.Ds have the same rise trend and both are a sharp increase after a slight rise.
Error: conteary Suggestion: contrary
Sentence: Specifically, master employees' number was 2 in 1991, after a domest increas to 5 in 1996, it went up to 25 in 2000, meanwhile, PH.D staff number is 0 in 1991, four years later in 1996, there was only one PH.D staff ,which less than 5 in 2000.
Error: increas Suggestion: increase
Error: domest Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Overall, employees are increasingly number of high educational backgrounds.
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Sentence: The bar chart illustrates different educational backgrounds number of a company's employees in 1991, 1996 and 2000.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to backgrounds and number
Sentence: As we can see from the diagram, the number of employees who dropped dramatically from 60 in 1991 to 33 in 1996, then it went down to 19 at the end of 2000, less than one in three of that in 1991.
No grammatical errors
Sentence: While the bachelors tend to change fluctuately from 20 in 1991 to the peak at 43 in 1996 and then it decreases to 33 in 2000.
No grammatical errors
Sentence: In conteary, masters and PH.Ds have the same rise trend and both are a sharp increase after a slight rise.
Description: The fragment a sharp increase is not usually preceded by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is
Sentence: Specifically, master employees' number was 2 in 1991, after a domest increas to 5 in 1996, it went up to 25 in 2000, meanwhile, PH.D staff number is 0 in 1991, four years later in 1996, there was only one PH.D staff ,which less than 5 in 2000.
No grammatical errors
Sentence: Overall, employees are increasingly number of high educational backgrounds.
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Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace Overall with adverb
Description: The fragment increasingly number of is not usually preceded by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is