It is wildly believed that, many families around the world tend to have fewer children than the past. At that time, there were lots of advantages and disadvantages to being part of a big family.
I think there were four main benefits. Firstly, children usually played with each other at their own places like in the same house, so they learned so striking social skills and remarkable experiences that in their life. They also quarreled, but when they quarreled, they learned to defend themselves. Secondly, because of existing different generations, they no longer needed to play out. Thirdly, children helped their fathers on the farm, and as a consequence, they became more responsible and powerful. Lastly, safety, which was referred the parents having more children.
Unfortunately, large families had many disadvantages. In the first place, one of the effects could be due to financial problems because parents had to work full time to pay for their children's education. As a result, they could not pay so much attention to individual children. Furthermore, parents were worried all the time how to manage children's marriage, so, in my view, this is one of the most important things that everyone needed to be considered.
On the whole, however, being a member of large family had advantages rather than disadvantages. Parents had less income, but they had a close relationship and they supported each other when they faced to problems. Also, surrounding many children in a big family never felt lonely.
- Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 11
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- The table and the bar chart below give information about traveling to work in Houston, Texas.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 11
- The chart and table below show customer satisfaction levels in the US with airlines and aspects of air travel in 1999, 2000, and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...al problems because parents had to work full time to pay for their childrens education. A...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, i think, as a result, in my view, on the whole, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14979757085 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81297574339 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611336032389 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7461518292 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4666666667 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251853145532 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941113369898 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672760440973 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171703364823 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762389559763 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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