The best way to solve the environmental problem is to reduce the amount of air travel.
Do you agree or disagree?.
Saving environment has always been a matter of concern. While some people are of the view that it is best to restrict the air travel, others, myself included, believe that other alternative solutions should be taken into consideration before reaching a decision.
The limitation of air travel can be justifiable to a certain extent. Firstly, planes do contribute to a significant proportion of pollution. Reports have shown that the fumes exhausted from the engine of plane causes pollution to the atmosphere. Furthermore, because of the fierce competition, air tickets become cheaper, making it possible to everyone. As a result, a larger amount of pollution is expected to be seen in the near future. It is not surprising that air transport has received more attention from the environmentalist recently.
On the other hand, restricting the air travel should not be a sole measure to the problem. It is believed that a combination of various solutions can achieve a more desirable outcome. Reducing the dependence on cars is one of the feasible measures. Governments can upgrade or enhance the public transports so that the citizens would restore these modes of transport. For example, buses can be equipped with air-condition and more buses should be operated to meet the need. In addition, raising the public awareness is another measure. Local authorities can set up regular campaigns to help people to understand the importance of environmental protection.
In conclusion, it cannot be denied the importance of restriction of air travel. However, to tackle the problem effectively, above recommendations should be in place too.
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