The table below shows CO2 emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union. The Pie Chart shows the percentage of European Union funds being spent on different forms of transport.
You should write at least 150 words
In this report, I want to describe two charts. First chart shows carbon dioxide (CO2) emission for different category of transport in European Union. Second chart shows the percentage of European Union funds being spent on different category of transport. According to the first chart, the highest emission transport in European Union is by air, which almost 400 grams of CO2 per passenger.
If we compared whit the pie chart below, there is a correlation. The pie chart describe, only 1 per cent of European Union money being spent in airports. In the other hand, most of money being spent in roads, while one passenger in road, consist less than 300 grams of CO2. Car produces one hundred grams per passenger, bus seventy grams per passenger, and coaches forty grams per passenger.
Apart of that, train and maritime, each contribute fifty grams CO2 per passenger, which funds being spent thirty-one per cent on railways and only two per cent on port. This ends my report.
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