Writing covering letter for a new job
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am applying for the position of waitress, which I saw advertised in Tuoi Tre newspaper on Monday 14 December.
I saw this advertisement in Tuoi Tre newspaper, it requested that the servers have to take care the needs of the customer in the dining area of the restaurant. Moreover, the servers make sure that each customers enjoys a fun, friendly, and relaxing dining experience. I consider myself to be a good waitress and I am also enthusiastic and flexible. I think some knowledge of Business Administration is suitable for this job. As experiences at the family restaurant, in my opinion, I am working this job as good as possible in the future. In my time at the family restaurant, the consumption is increased for a long time. I make friends with some customers and I am keeping in touch with them now. I hope Pizza Hut's training for the servers can help know the products and the services.
After a long time in my present job, I feel it is time to take on a new challenge. I would like to try with a new work environment and a new management. Working at the Pizza Hut Restaurant is an opportunity to improve English skills.
I very much look forward to hearing from you.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, so, thus, i feel, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55963302752 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89452085654 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56880733945 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5768971943 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4615384615 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14995758867 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521646612111 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573924240956 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767011419877 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555379442821 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.