Writing covering letter for a waitress
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am applying for the position of waitress, which I saw advertised in Tuoi Tre newspaper on Monday 14 December.
I saw this advertisement in Tuoi Tre newspaper, it requested that the servers have to take care the needs of the customer in the dining area of the restaurant. Moreover, the servers make sure that each customers enjoys a fun, friendly, and relaxing dining experience. I consider myself to be a good waitress and I am also enthusiastic and flexible. I think some knowledge of Business Administration is suitable for this job. As experiences at the family restaurant, in my opinion, I am working this job as good as possible in the future. In my time at the family restaurant, the consumption is increased for a long time. I make friends with some customers and I am keeping in touch with them now. I hope Pizza Hut's training for the servers can help know the products and the services.
After a long time in my present job, I feel it is time to take on a new challenge. I would like to try with a new work environment and a new management. Working at the Pizza Hut Restaurant is an opportunity to improve English skills.
I very much look forward to hearing from you.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, so, thus, i feel, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55963302752 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89452085654 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56880733945 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5768971943 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.4615384615 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0941997363257 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333638737399 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440388865101 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0562340003831 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595365713818 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.