tpo 11
task1
The article states that people are reading less literature than they used to, and provide three reason of support. However, the professor explains that people read scientic and history book as novels, which are in high quality and refutes of the author's reasons.
First, the reading states that people who reading the books declined, in these days, especially for literature. The professor's lecture opposes this point by explain that there are less book in generally. We also learn that the books are not good.
Another reason that the professor uses to casts doubt on the reading is that the culture of people changed in these day. According to the professor, in past, in many cultures, it is waste time to listen to music or watch the movie but today the culture change, and it is not accurate about novels. However, the reading claims that the books are less demanded and people are willing to spend their time to watch tv or listen to music.
Finally, the article posits that the literature written in good way .However, the professor argues that the author does not write the article in good way. According to the professor, the authors write the article in way, which is difficult to undrestand.
In conclusion, the points made in the lecture contrast with the reading.
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Sentence: First, the reading states that people who reading the books declined, in these days, especially for literature.
Description: A WH-pronoun, nominative is not usually followed by a verb, present participle or gerund
Suggestion: Refer to who and reading
Sentence: The professor's lecture opposes this point by explain that there are less book in generally.
Description: A preposition is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to by and explain
Sentence: Another reason that the professor uses to casts doubt on the reading is that the culture of people changed in these day.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to casts and doubt
Sentence: However, the professor explains that people read scientic and history book as novels, which are in high quality and refutes of the author's reasons.
Error: scientic Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: According to the professor, the authors write the article in way, which is difficult to undrestand.
Error: undrestand Suggestion: understand
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2 Read some grammar books.
Need more compound or complex sentences.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 18 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 11 9
No. of Words: 218 250
No. of Characters: 1028 1200
No. of Different Words: 107 120
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.843 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.716 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.228 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 74 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 55 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 24 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.818 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.644 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.636 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.409 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.643 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.118 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4