Communication is an important and essential for life of people in the past, now and future. With the advant of Internet, communication becomes easier now than the past. It is ture that Internet is making people to contact with one other more easy. The efficiency of communication via Internet is exhibited by saving time and exceeding the comfinement of location.
To begin with, communication via Internet is time saving. A short message or phone call will reach the receiver instantly. Comparing with other means of communication, take letter for example, the delievery takes days even weeks. In the fast-pace era, Internet is the major route to transmit the latest information. If a same message is sent by post, it will become an out-dated news when arriving the receiver. Due to the trait of time saving and almost simulteniously transfering, Internet is efficient for communication.
Furthermore, Internet exceed the limitation of lacation. Messages can be sent to any people wherever in the universe as long as he has a receive device. Letters can only be mailed with a country two centruries ago. Nonetheless, scientists are capable of send messages to astronauts in the International Space Station. With the utilizing of Internet, English learners from Asian countries are able to tale to teachers in the UK and the USA via Skype. All these could happen because of the efficient means of communication via Internet.
To recapitulate, the great invention of Internet enables people to communicate with one another regardless of the time and lacation. The breaking confinement of lacation and the almost simultenious transmitting make Internet an efficent tool for communication.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Internet) must be used with a third-person verb: 'exceeds'.
Suggestion: exceeds
...communication. Furthermore, Internet exceed the limitation of lacation. Messages ca...
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Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...rever in the universe as long as he has a receive device. Letters can only be mailed with...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, nonetheless, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31226765799 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17036954832 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576208178439 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.0097716733 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.3888888889 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9444444444 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327402279801 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104750539117 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892717852166 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22888452943 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101536866767 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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