An international development organization, in response to a vitamin A deficiency among people in the impoverished nation of Tagus, has engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A. While seeds for this new type of millet cost more, farmers will be paid subsidies for farming the new variety of millet. Since millet is already a staple food in Tagus, people will readily adopt the new variety. To combat vitamin A deficiency, the government of Tagus should do everything it can to promote this new type of millet.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
In the arguement, author attributes to promote the new type of millet rich in Vitamin A for the people of Tagus. Millet is already a staple food in Tagus so people will readily adopt the new variety of millet.People taking old breed of millet was not rich in Vitamin A.So, definitely Tagus population will adopt a new variety of millet.Having a meticulous analysis, the author need to answer some of the questions to reach to the correct conclusion. a)Will people of Tagus invest in this new type of millet? b)How the government will promote the new breed of millet in every corner of Tagus? c)Will seeds of this new type of millet suits Tagus climate?
As the seeds of new breed of millet cost more, definitely millet as a product will cost more.Some people can't afford to buy it.So, initially government should distribute free samples of new millet to everyone living in Tagus.If people find worth investing then they will surely go for this new breed of millet to enlarge their Vitamin A sufficiency.
Government has to take extra measures to promote this new millet. Through proper marketing strategy government can promote this product.By making Advertisements, hoardings everyone will notice this new type of millet and will get ready to try this new breed.
Point of concern is that whether seeds of new breed of millet suits the Tagus climatic condition. Farmers will have to decide that seeds to be grown in their field adapt Tagus climate or not.Inspite farmers will be paid subsidies for farming the new type of millet but new type of millet should be according to Tagus weather condition.
In conclusion, the government of Tagus should do all the marketing campaigns to promote this new breed of millet which is rich in Vitamin A by taking care of every individual earning status.
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Sentence: In the arguement, author attributes to promote the new type of millet rich in Vitamin A for the people of Tagus.
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