shoud you never judge a person by external appearance ?
In our life, having an attractive look is real strength. Therefore, eveyone always equip themselves by with a perfect appearance. It is so hard to find out their nature. It takes me much time to learn how to distinguish good people and bad people. It essential for me to protect myself.
As I see it, godd people don't necessarily have good looks. But they always help us when we are in trouble. Being alwalys beside us when we need help. It is the sincerity, kindness that truly good people can do. We should cherish and cutivate this relationship, because finding a truly good for us in this life is really hard !
The next I want to share with you is how to distinguish bad people. They were always to be friendly, always speak to help us. But when we are in trouble, they do not appear. And more thing you heve pay attention to the way of life and their attitude to those around them. It is the most concrete evidence to assesss a person.
The obvious conclusion to be drawn is that distinguishing good or bad people is really difficult. As a result you should consider carefully before starting a new relationship. Life is not easy as we thought.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...distinguish good people and bad people. It essential for me to protect myself. ...
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...It essential for me to protect myself. As I see it, godd people dont necessa...
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...myself. As I see it, godd people dont necessarily have good looks. But they a...
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...for us in this life is really hard ! The next I want to share with you is how...
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...ncrete evidence to assesss a person. The obvious conclusion to be drawn is th...
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...good or bad people is really difficult. As a result you should consider carefully ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 210.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51904761905 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62327305294 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604761904762 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6110281896 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.8235294118 106.682146367 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.3529411765 20.7667163134 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.88235294118 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0615384175743 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0200468050259 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328361720946 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0425697892258 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524386880219 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 13.0946893788 46% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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