Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Governments don’t have to offer financial support their major cities in order to preserve and generate nations’ cultural traditions. Injured by economy prosperity and the trend of globalization in major cities, common cities preserve and develop traditional culture much better than major cities, so it will make little difference to funding major cities. Besides, since the cultivation of cultural traditions is a process much free from financial problems, governments have no necessity to fund this process. Even worse, the intervention of government may make negative effects and obstruct the ...
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