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The graphs compare the numbers of foreign visitors came to the UK, UK residents traveled other countries and the most prevalent nations for UK people to visit.
It is clear from the line graph that the quantity of people in the UK visited oversease and travelers from abroad to the UK all grew from 1979 to 1999. In terms of the bar chart, France attracted the most visitors from the UK.
In terms of line graph, in 1979, the number of UK people came to other countries was highest, at approximately 14 million, while the figure for foreigner was slightly lower, at 10 million. In 1999, the quantity of UK residents visited abroad increased dramatically by 40 million to over 50 million, and remained the highest figure in the line graph. At the same time, there was a slow climb to under 30 million in the number of overseas residents came to the UK.
In terms of bar chart, in 1999, the quantity of UK residents coming to France was highest, at around 11 million, whereas the figure for Turkey stood at only 2 million. Meanwhile, about 3 million and 4 million UK visitors came to Greece and the USA respectively. There were nearly 10 million UK people visiting to Spain.
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The bar charts illustrate the proportion of energy consumed in an average household and the rate of greenhouse gas discharge of appliances in Australia.
It is clear from the bar charts that cooling device use the least energy and generate the least greenhouse gas in an Australian household. Additionally, apart from heating appliance, the figure for another devices all increase.
In terms of Australian household energy use, the proportion of water heating appliance is highest, at 30%, while the figure for refrigeration is significantly lower, at only 7%. At the same time, heating account for 42% of Australian household energy use. By contrast, 2% and 15% of energy are used for cooling and refrigeration respectively.
In terms of Australian household greenhouse gas emissions, the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions from water heating device is highest, at 32%, while the figure for cooling is remarkably lower, at only 3%. Meanwhile, refrigeration and lighting make up 14% and 8% of greenhouse gas emissions in an Australian household respectively. At the same time, 15% of gas emissions is consumed for heating.
3.
The tables show that population in the world, and distribution in six areas in 1950 and 2000, prediction of this in 2050 .
It is clear from the tables that the total world population is expected to increase dramatically from 2,5 million in 1950 to 9 million in 2050. Additionally, Asia was distributed the largest population in 1950 and 2000.
In 1950, the percentage of population in Asia was highest, at 56%, whereas the figure for Africa was significantly lower, at 9%. At the same time, 22%, 6%,and 1% of the total world population were from European population, Latin American people and people living in Oceania respectively. Meanwhile, population in North America accounted for 7% of population in the world.
In 2000, the rate of Asian residents grew slightly by 4% to 60% and remained the highest figure in the table. There were a slow climbs to 9%, 5%, 1% in the figure for Lantin America, North America, and Oceania respectively. By contrast, Europe’s figure experienced a steady decrease of 10% to 12%. At the same time, the year 2000 witnessed an insignificant increase to 13% in the proportion of African population.
1.
The graphs compare the numbers of foreign visitors came to the UK, UK residents traveled other countries and the most prevalent nations for UK people to visit.
It is clear from the line graph that the quantity of people in the UK visited oversease and travelers from abroad to the UK all grew from 1979 to 1999. In terms of the bar chart, France attracted the most visitors from the UK.
In terms of line graph, in 1979, the number of UK people came to other countries was highest, at approximately 14 million, while the figure for foreigner was slightly lower, at 10 million. In 1999, the quantity of UK residents visited abroad increased dramatically by 40 million to over 50 million, and remained the highest figure in the line graph. At the same time, there was a slow climb to under 30 million in the number of overseas residents came to the UK.
In terms of bar chart, in 1999, the quantity of UK residents coming to France was highest, at around 11 million, whereas the figure for Turkey stood at only 2 million. Meanwhile, about 3 million and 4 million UK visitors came to Greece and the USA respectively. There were nearly 10 million UK people visiting to Spain.
2.
The bar charts illustrate the proportion of energy consumed in an average household and the rate of greenhouse gas discharge of appliances in Australia.
It is clear from the bar charts that cooling device use the least energy and generate the least greenhouse gas in an Australian household. Additionally, apart from heating appliance, the figure for another devices all increase.
In terms of Australian household energy use, the proportion of water heating appliance is highest, at 30%, while the figure for refrigeration is significantly lower, at only 7%. At the same time, heating account for 42% of Australian household energy use. By contrast, 2% and 15% of energy are used for cooling and refrigeration respectively.
In terms of Australian household greenhouse gas emissions, the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions from water heating device is highest, at 32%, while the figure for cooling is remarkably lower, at only 3%. Meanwhile, refrigeration and lighting make up 14% and 8% of greenhouse gas emissions in an Australian household respectively. At the same time, 15% of gas emissions is consumed for heating.
3.
The tables show that population in the world, and distribution in six areas in 1950 and 2000, prediction of this in 2050 .
It is clear from the tables that the total world population is expected to increase dramatically from 2,5 million in 1950 to 9 million in 2050. Additionally, Asia was distributed the largest population in 1950 and 2000.
In 1950, the percentage of population in Asia was highest, at 56%, whereas the figure for Africa was significantly lower, at 9%. At the same time, 22%, 6%,and 1% of the total world population were from European population, Latin American people and people living in Oceania respectively. Meanwhile, population in North America accounted for 7% of population in the world.
In 2000, the rate of Asian residents grew slightly by 4% to 60% and remained the highest figure in the table. There were a slow climbs to 9%, 5%, 1% in the figure for Lantin America, North America, and Oceania respectively. By contrast, Europe’s figure experienced a steady decrease of 10% to 12%. At the same time, the year 2000 witnessed an insignificant increase to 13% in the proportion of African population.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, whereas, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.0 286% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 6.8 265% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => OK
Preposition: 109.0 33.7804878049 323% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 19.0 3.97073170732 479% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2883.0 965.302439024 299% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 583.0 196.424390244 297% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94511149228 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91379618374 3.73543355544 132% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90350324424 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 106.607317073 208% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.380789022298 0.547539520022 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 870.3 283.868780488 307% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.33902439024 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 28.0 3.36585365854 832% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 8.94146341463 313% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.099414088 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.964285714 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8214285714 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 5.23603664747 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 12.0 3.83414634146 313% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 3.70975609756 377% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356398843555 0.215688989381 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116376790834 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187193821944 0.0843802449381 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18378144684 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.258928997861 0.0819641961636 316% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 40.7170731707 226% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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