Many people all over the world do not have jobs at all, or do not have adequate jobs. What are the causes of this problem and what can be done to solve it?
It is true that unemployment has a negative impact on people and the government. These problems are best explained by a lack of experience and technological alterations but it can be alleviated by training courses and economic stimuli.
It is difficult to argue with the idea that a shortage of experience and considerable alterations in technology tend to diminish the number of jobs enormously. Initially, despite a growing number of fresh graduates each year, companies still find challenging to recruit a suitable employee with professional knowledge and soft skills to fulfill job requirements. As a result, these students graduating from universities fail to obtain necessary job experiences, exacerbating a jobless phenomenon. Furthermore, sophisticated technologies are more likely to replace the role of the workforce. For example, in the Nike company, the presence of automatic machines generally associates with the elimination of manual jobs, which forces workers to face the daunting future of losing their job.
There are two actions that governments could take to solve the problems described above. Firstly, a simple solution would be to enhance the quality of education in universities. For example, a university is not only but also sending fresh students into firms to know practical requirements but also preparing workshops in schools could provide an opportunity to learn soft skills so that young people will be able to find easy to look for a new job so that they can earn money as well. A second measure would be for governments to encourage younger people to attend startup programs in order to increase the number of people with self-employment. It means that more and more job opportunities will be creased in society and decrease those who have no job.
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- Many people all over the world do not have jobs at all, or do not have adequate jobs. What are the causes of this problem and what can be done to solve it? 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'recruiting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: recruiting
... year, companies still find challenging to recruit a suitable employee with professional k...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, so, still, well, for example, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30281690141 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15986158762 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612676056338 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8958574859 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.5 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13823548287 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04670791244 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303937935261 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894241193803 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360328144954 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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